this is really awesome and interesting i cant wait to see what happens next please continue!

I want to thank you so very much for sharing this story. Yes it's sad and yes there's angst and yes there's drama. However, it all slides together into a satisfying whole.

Again, thank you.

I don't know if I can find words for this. Seeing this series on ffnet is incredible. It was one of the pieces that got me hooked on Ranma fanfiction in the first place. Well, anything written by you. I think I still have a bookmark to your homepage somewhere. ;)

It'll be great to see what else your mind has come up with in the last couple of years.

As for this story, I find it fully plausible and highly enjoyable. Life never is easy, as is proven time and time again here. You are good at describing what needs descriptions and I feel that I can follow the thoughts of the characters rather well. And I can feel the emotions where I sit.

There are passages that I can agree to need improving, but at the same time, they were mostly untested at the time of you writing them.

This Chronicle will always hold a spot of honour on my HDD.

Best Wishes

/ecchansama

I must admit when i read the original sunrise, i was slightly disheartened to hear you kill off akane, shampoo, ryoga and mousse, but i decided to see where you would take it. I'll be reading lessons shortly as i have thoroughly enjoyed the ride you've taken us on. Keep up your excellent writing, because as a fellow writer, you have the gift

ah this takes me back. this was one of the first i ever read way back in the 90s. good to be able to read it again