| Reviews for Naruto: Rise of the Espers |
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devilDragontrail chapter 1 . 5/29 Aku tidak suka ceritanya, kau bisa mati dan menderita dinaraka terdalam |
Guest chapter 7 . 5/22/2017 Wrath,plz i really need the next chapter,why did u stop the story is interesting,can't wait for the war to begin |
Wolfone10 chapter 4 . 11/13/2016 Why not just KILL the "councils"?.. Between two sannin not even danzo has a hope in HELL.. He lost to sasuke for heaven's sake... Threatening her loved ones?.. RIGHT THERE IS HIGH TREASON! and other then naruto SHE DOESN'T HAVE ANY LOVED ONES! (maybe the perv and maybe shizune.. but those two are already history if she does nothing)... CALL FOR CIVIL WAR! Let danzo fight for it, die for it and konoha be nothing but a smoldering RUIN! This is why danzo would NEVER act this openly.. He wants to rule konoha, NOT a smoking pile of destroyed buildings, (which is all that would be left if he moved against tsunade like he is in this one).. after all even with EVERY SINGLE civilian on his side (which he doesn't have) they would be NO MATCH even for a single TEAM of shinobi. He needs shinobi and other then his root.. HE DOESN'T HAVE ANY... So just KILL the frickin' people.. If he uses that EYE thing of his to not die?.. Then fine don't go after danzo.. KILL every one that listens to him.. SMASH skulls, crush throats.. etc.. She's MORE powerful then ANYONE (that's how she got the title), Send the perv into sage mode.. and TAKE back the city by FORCE! Show the old guy why this was an idiotic idea in the first place! (not that tough... Never understood the rationale on some writers, IF you HAVE power but NEVER FLIPPING use it, then it's the same as NOT having it) |
Wolfone10 chapter 3 . 11/12/2016 You know something always struck me as ODDBALL with a lot of these (pump up naruto, so you GOTTA pump up sasgay and the others...)... If they ALREADY had that kinda power WHY even try to take the tailed beasts? Just beat em' down and take the world... If naruto was ALREADY chosen for a "destiny" HOW THE HELL does sasuke get brought in, for doing NOTHING?... At the VERY LEAST it should be another jinchuriki that has gone through the same stuff, not a stupid spoiled child..He gets a pump up (from his GENNIN days) when he deserves it... OH YEAH THAT"S NEVER. |
Ntraveler chapter 7 . 12/8/2015 Do continue this please it is a great story |
Anime100 chapter 7 . 11/17/2012 (laughs so much) that was so hilarious...please update soon |
Raven Marcus chapter 7 . 2/12/2012 interesting! |
Akuma-Heika chapter 5 . 11/12/2011 Chiriji Raden Kazari Tsurugi meaning? Because of your explanations does Sage mode turn Naruto half Esper? Sage mode draws in natural energy and the espers are incarnations of nature's forces so would that mean he temp becomes half-esper? |
Akuma-Heika chapter 3 . 11/12/2011 This is good. What are the other forms used for the espers? small Harem? If not I am liking the idea of NaruKyuu or NaruShiva. |
Impstar chapter 7 . 6/29/2011 This story is quite a good one. I wonder what happened to Hinata? I hope you update soon so we can find out. Sakura... was never my favorite character. I partially blame it on reading too many Sakura bashing fics out there, but also because no matter how strong she gets (though it does decrease over time) she also reverts to 'help me Naruto-kun!' Actually, for that reason, I should probably dis Hinata as well, but she's a more likable character for me. Oh well. I eagerly await the next update. |
Hikari no Minerva chapter 7 . 6/2/2011 PLEASE write another chapter soon! GOD BLESS! Hikari |
Setsuai Kijo chapter 7 . 4/26/2011 Wargarble! So disappointed for the lack of a next chapter button when I finished seven. Very good read so far. |
ranma hibiki chapter 7 . 4/5/2011 good fights! and wow, sakura was ticked O_o |
Sraiden chapter 7 . 4/4/2011 Awesome! I love this fic! :) Update soon please! |
Beloved Daughter chapter 7 . 3/24/2011 Thanks for finally updating! I really liked Naruto's tests, which I thought realistically showed that yes, Naruto is stronger without making him some type of powerful ninja God. I have to admit that I slapped my head when I read what Naruto did to the mob. Very Naruto-like if also very perverted. I can't wait for your next chapter update! |