Bella is so moody in this, Jesus. I dont think there's been a time where she's been talking with Jacob and didn't throw a hissy fit every time he said something she didn't like

hi, this is a great story - the first jasper&bella i'm reading and i love it. thanks a lot!

I looked for a lesson in release and couldn't find it

Thank you so much!
I loved your story and admire your writing.

"He was pretty harmless, I think." I said, "He just didn't know how to take no for an answer."

Guys that don't heeda no are the opposite of harmless.

A woman needing a guy to reinforce her no towards another guy and then calling the situation harmless is the epitome of patriarchal bullshit!

Okay so I hardly ever review fics before I get to the last update because I’m too busy reading like it’s the air I need to breathe but I’m in pain. So much freaking pain. There are tears streaming down my face. This hurts so freaking much. Why can’t they find a way together? I need them to be together. They need each other. They’re perfect for each other. I hate this fic for that. My heart hurts man :(

this is the second time of reading this.
ive been reading lots of jasper bella fanfictions and all they're doing is making me like him more and more.
i honestly cant believe Im jealous of a fictional character.
you made me love jasper even more

Damn it ! I already read this story when you published it, but I still love it so much! And, like the last time, I tell myself ... that there are no contest between Jasper and Edward!
It is because of you that I became a "Team Jasper" !

Congratulations again for this story!

see... this is why jasper is my favourite vampire...

regarding AN, yes and no I think he'd rather avoid at all costs any exposed blood the slightly modified lyrics in the cover by London Grammar may have worked better for the story, but I like both versions I love pinball, used to play on a rickety Spiderman machine in a Cornish pub

Wow. I must say I literally devoured your story. It was the first time I read a fanfiction which didn't deal with the pairing Edward/Bella but with a pairing I only thought of when I saw the tension between them in the movies and in the novels (less though).
True, you made me reconsider lots of characters of this franchise and this saga.
Alice is, well, after all this time my favorite character and wow, it's was odd but not too far-fetched to depict her the way you did. In fact, you succeeded in matching her secret personality (and her questionable motive regarding Bella) with the Alice we know in the books and in the movies without caricaturing her. Bravo
Bella, well, I don't like her. I know, I know she is the main character but I've always found her too naïve, too stupid (she wanted to meet James alone, she searched for solitude in the second novel whereas she knows Victoria wants her revenge, she wants to have her baby and she dared call her Renesmée (bleurk)) but thanks to you, the character still was herself but appeared more reasonable and finally understood that Edward is not perfect (and has some flaws in fact, despite the fact I love him, he's patronizing and thinks too much for his own good).
Mike. Wow. I didn't like him but now, I may have reconsidered my position. In fact, I reconsidered the "human aspect". In Stephenie Meyer's novels, the human part was kind of canceled, hidden... in order to, in my view, highlight the formidable aspect/abilities/... of the Quileutes and the Cullen clan. But, with you, there was a balance between the fantastic part and the human part as if Bella remembered the pleasures and joys of being a simple human.
Then the Cullen, I loved your depiction of Emmett (he is so funny) and I found interesting the way they were overwhelmed by Edward's departure and Alice's true colors. They are not as amazing as Bella thought and for the best (they didn't say goodbye in the second novel after all but despite that I still love all of them (except maybe Rosalie) )
Finally, I loved the way you told the story of Jasper and Bella. It seemed legitimate, natural... but passionate (while I love the pairing Edward/Bella, when she was human, it wasn't really deep, passionate... (only because Edward limited himself and for no reason) that's why I say: Wow.
It was my pleasure to read your story and now, I will look for other stories about Bella and Jasper with pleasure. Thank you. Your story was amazing ! Keep on writing, you are gifted !

Oh I wish someone would try to actually do that sketch! Very nice!

Now I'm really in the middle about everything.

Fucking little #*&

Do you know how much I hate bella