Wow. Just wow. I read the AN, and thought 'oh, ok, I can understand that, school definitely comes before recreation...' but then I saw the update date... and wow...

All I can say now is that I really like this story and I really hope that my review might motivate you to continue it :) ...that is... if you haven't left FF completely... that would make me sad :(

I hope you come back!

Great Story!

i love this sotry, i really do. and i hope you update soon.

Oh yay! You had me so worried there. For a second I thought that you were going to say that you were discontinuing it. I'm so glad to hear (read?) that you're just going to be a bit longer. College can do that to you. Good luck with all of that, and I'm glad to hear it'll be updated soon! (It truly made my day.)

Yay, great! Please update soon!

I'll wait. Forever if I need to.

:)

As long as it will be written sometime, then I okay here.

Lovely, simply lovely...your stories never cease to amaze...

Why are all you stories so damn amazing? I want you to update your stories now!

TEWG: D CONTINUE! I COMMAND YOU TO! THIS IS TOO GOOD A STORY TO LEAVE DISCONTINUED!

801: Please update! Please! Please! Please! I love the plot and concept of it all!

TEWG & 801

This is really awesome. I've read a few AkuRoku stories that have come from the Dark Knight and didn't even like them. But this is really awesome. I really enjoyed reading this and couldn't stop for anything. I can't wait to see what the second part has instore for us! I can tell it's going to be good!

O, neat story so far! I love how Axel's scary yet sorta sweet at the same time!

and I hate Rox's dad, that guy sucks!

hey, when you say character death in the warning, you don't mean Axel or Rox do you? That'd be terrible! You should make it his dad that dies. kukuku...

Please update, hope to see some akuroku soon!

Great chapter, I love the way that you portray Axel!

Please update soon, I really want to see what will happen next~

You know what's cool...

...your story!

Yeah!

I dig it!

I can't wait for the next chapter!

I think you should kill Roxas' dad.

Like Roxas should become a serial killer with Axel.

)

This story is so cool, you have to update it again soon! Please?

oh my gosh, yay!

i love it when axels a serial killer! XD

and of course, stealing roxas needed to happen.

as for any suggestions - i think axel should try to return roxas for some reason or another, get caught, get put on death sentence, yadda yadda. with some roxas being a hero and all that crap

I love this story so far, please post the second half soon! I hope that everything works out for Roxas and Axel, and that Sora gets away from his mean Dad. (I hope he loses the election!)