yay! this is so sweet! i love it!

I like your story.

please, please continue!

i adore this story! it's so sweet and sad...

i would love to see the next chapters and possibly the end.

although, judging by your last update date, that's not likely...i would like to thank you anyways, for writing such a phenomenal story.

i enjoyed it very much, and you captured the dynamic between the twins and their personalities better than anyone i've read so far (even if it's OC...i can't know for sure)

so many tokio hotel fics are just quickly-written, badly thought-out stories, and having now read three of yours, i can say that they are nothing like that.

thank you for writing wonderfully.

Please, Bitte, porfavor, sil' vous plait, kudasai update sooon... i effin love this fanfic... i cant wait for the next chapter

i await your next post this story is deffinetly one of the few favorites i have

That was amazing so far! You REALLY need to continue it! Please! Bitte, in German, Por favor, in Spanish! I can't speak anymore languages but that was amazing!

xD You are a great writer. I've been loving this. ]

And you said this wasn't a happy fiction! [Am I going to regret saying that?] I loved this chapter. And I have to say... this has helped me get out of my pathetic stupor. ]

Ah, great. The end. That was nice. ] Good way to end...

OH, wait.. There's more? Damn. And that was such a good place to end it...on a happy note. lol

I'm thinking I'll just stop reading this after the first chapter and pretend it's a happy ending.

This is great writing and an awesome story, I can tell. But I'm afraid I'll get to chapter five and long for the rest to have the conclusion never come.

Besides, you said this wasn't happy, and I'm already depressed. No need to make myself worse. Perhaps I'll come back and read this again later.

Either way, just thought I'd review and let you know that what I read of it was brilliant... And I'm not sure if I can stop reading because I suddenly have the strong urge to go read the next chapter.

i only i have one thing to say...UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE! (didnt say i wouldnt repeat it alot!)

Hey, I really like this story! It's better written than most of the TH storys on here. Update soon!

awesomeness lol...

poor Bill he sounds i don't know...sad

good thing Tom's there...

nana...:)

Reported. Real person fiction is not allowed on FFnet.

Aww~! This story just keeps getting cuuterr and cuuterr! XDD

I hope they get some sexy - i mean alone time soon! X3