Reviews for ORCHIDS AND FIRE
jevaisspongebob chapter 1 . 6/21
Legalt ...Don't be rude,as if you could write better...this author is the best
Legalt chapter 2 . 5/17
Aaaaand it's ruined. Seems no one on this website can write romance without some trashy trumped up drama. Mind wipe? Seriously? After all that? And of course the typical plot of she's pregnant soon. My god, what a complete joke this turned out to be. And you know what? It sucks because you write very well.

Good luck, although it's clear you quit writing or something.
Guest chapter 11 . 5/3
Beautiful story.
Guest chapter 11 . 12/31/2019
I love your SMWW fanfics. You’re an amazing writer. I wished we had more family/married stories to read. If I may request/submit a plot or 2, I would love to read a tale about Diana and Clark being college sweethearts who got married and don’t know the other is actually a superhero and that they work together. It’s obviously inspired by Mr. & Mrs. Smith. Another plot I have would be that they are married for some time (no kids though) but instead of evil villains alien invasion being the cause of their stress, it’s their everyday life that take center stage (missing deadlines, raising money for charity, forgetting anniversaries, and dealing with the in laws). Life throws them a curve ball when they discover that Lex has created Connor, a toddler who happens to be a clone of Clark but the dna sample that was used was contaminated with Diana’s and has parts of both of them. After rescuing him, Connor becomes part of the family and have to integrate the boy into their daily life and learn how to be crime fighting parents. These are some ideas I’ve come up with and would love if you could flush it out. I’m not the best at putting my thoughts on paper and I also don’t read their comics which means I don’t know much about the characters. I hope you my ideas can inspire you to write amazing fanfics but if not, that is fine. I still enjoy your writing. Thanks
asingh123 chapter 2 . 11/20/2019
Good story gone bad for "me"...

And I wonder wtf happened to Amazon history for their champion to do the same mentally to somebody else... a loved one no lesd

What a pack of BS... Puny Wisdom...
Guest chapter 1 . 9/29/2019
WARRIOR CULTURES-I am under the impression that true warrior cultures, such as the Amazons, are also trained to accept death on the battlefield. This does not make them immune to combat-related PTSD but, just perhaps, it might make that form of PTSD less crippling. Frequent celebrations of each fallen warrior's accomplishments might also help. If those warriors had some kind of artistic talent/s those would survive as positive reminders. Consider: the Epic of Gilgamesh is somewhere between 3000 to 6000 years old and yet we have a reasonably complete translation available for reading. The memories, and nightmares, of battle may always remain but with proper treatment there is the hope of peace and acceptance.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/29/2019
First & foremost: The "Superman Wonder Woman Fan Archive " is GONE! It closed down in 2015 (I'm writing this late in 2019). I do NOT know if the stories have been transferred elsewhere. I hope that they have. Next, genuine history as a parallel: During World War 2 US Army combat medics were unarmed & were REQUIRED to wear helmets with blatantly obvious targets on them-red crosses on white backgrounds in addition to a white armband with another red cross. Although great in theory in reality it told the enemy whom to kill first. By the Vietnam War the targets were gone and some medics carried a pistol solely as last-ditch self-defense of themselves & their patient/s. Modern medics are trained with the same rifle/carbine that other soldiers use but are only allowed to use it DEFENSIVELY (self & patient/s). There are many other weapons that medical soldiers are legally prohibited from using. SM's self-imposed vow would be void in Asgard as many denizens are more powerful & deadlier than he is. He probably would still suffer from some form of PTSD, such as his fear of telling WW that he loved her in case she died. (Continued in "Warrior Cultures")
rishi547 chapter 1 . 5/22/2019
this first chapter was so amazingly sick, fucking 10/10 bro.
SacredxMaiden chapter 11 . 12/18/2018
This story had me hooked from the start. It was amazing, well done and a fantastic idea. Bravo!
SacredxMaiden chapter 2 . 12/17/2018
Oh my god.
I'm only on the 2nd chapter and I'm crying.
Amazingly written, I cant wait to find out what happens next.
I truly believe this is the decision Diana would make if she were in this situation.
DianaKal fan chapter 11 . 12/12/2018
This is a good ending for this story. Now we need a few thousand more. Naturally they need to be filled to overflowing with action, adventure, drama, some humor, uncertainty, zeal, & so very much more. Why won't DC give the fans the stories they deserve? I've seen too many lackluster reboots (ALL brands!) over the decades. Diana & Kal is/was an incredible idea, a natural fit. Destroying that is/was mean-spirited at best.
DianaKal fan chapter 1 . 12/12/2018
He waits For 1000 yrs before kissing her? If I were him I would have waited at most 10 years! Shieldmates such as they can only be comfortable together. They are too valuable to each other in ALL possible ways...forever. With each at the other's back in battle they have been unbeatable. Arm in arm in peace they would be unstoppable as well as role-models. Their children would weld them to each other much more strongly. Even if they immediately go into retirement after this war & live as simply as possible their allies would always seek their counsel. They have truly carved out a world for themselves. Long centuries of battle would have left them sleeping in each other's arms for comfort, reassurance, &, yes, true love. It's so obvious why DC panicked & deliberately sabotaged the story. Just imagine the well-written movie franchise this should have been!
DracoShagMe chapter 11 . 10/26/2018
i swear to gods, i could never tire from your stories! I keep coming back to them! this was beautiful and well written and this gets better everytime i read it. *sighs*
SuperWonderStan chapter 11 . 10/20/2018
((Let's out a satisfied sigh))

My enjoyment of story has not diminished with the second reading. This was so well done that I had to come back and gush about it some more after reading it again.

I just love stories in which Diana and Kal start from friendship and progress into more. I will always prefer this to Joe Kelly's insulting "Immortal Beloved." However, your suggestion that there may be a connection regarding the title & storyline and Beethoven's own story is compelling and certainly seems plausible. If it turns out to be true that there was an intentional parallel with Diana and Kal's story in Kelly's piece to Beethoven and his mysterious woman, then it appears that Joe Kelly was a lot more clever than I appreciated. He always did seem to have a slant towards SMWW whenever they appeared together.
kay82764 chapter 1 . 10/15/2018
I cannot stop loving this story! No matter how many times I read it.
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