Okay, the Naru and Yasu part threw me off, I almost burst out laughing. Mai and John were so cute though!

Good one-shot.

That was soooo cute. We really need more fics about Mai and John and not stray away from their charater. You've really captured their personality :))

Oh I love this!

cutw xD

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-laughs- This was cute~! And funny - I laughed my head off when I realized that Naru and Yasuhara were a couple (mere seconds before it was revealed, btw~!) John/Mai & Naru/Yasuhara FOREVA~! -

aww so sweet - this is so kawaii xx

YAY! Fav Ghost Hunt pairing ever! YAY!

aw... that was actually very cute... I don't like to think of John being with anyone other than me (lol) but I can see him with Mai. How cute! Good job!

Aw, it was such a sweet story~!

It's good to see that I'm not the only one who thought those two made an awfully cute couple :3

Sweet! :D me likes!

i LOVE the maixjohn pairing! i've never seen it before, and it's actually really sweet and cute! gr8t story!

heh...Naru/Yasuhara? Hmm... *cogs in brain begin to work*

This was pretty funny. You might want to work on description-it seems like your writing is very dialogue heavy-but I still liked it XD

And you had John totally IC :)

hey!naru and yasuhara are couple?shoked..

sorry,correct me if i'm wrong

i just find it weird

but intresting

naru and mai all the way..

update soon..

i just hope it's one of silly dreams of mai