cute! Wished it was longer though

Very nice, sweet story.

Wow...

I really like this fic!

It's nice to see Rukia in the role of the "protector" from time to time.

I like it ...yes .. Ulquiorra would have defeated her, but remember the purpose for him being there was not the actual fight, but to show she would die to save Ichigo..

Great Read

regards

LeRukia

omg i luv it! so cute! yea i also do think she wouldnt last against ulquiorra but i still lover her XD

nice job!

lol I was going to ask why did Ulq leave... then I read your AN. I agree with you; Rukia doesn't have a chance with Ulq's awesomeness, unless she ascends to bankai suddenly (lol! I do hope we get to see her bankai one day - and her transformation due to ichigo haha!)

Your description and wording .. is excellent. But be careful with the " "

ie. /...slowly “It's dangerous.. Rukia.. Stay away” His brown eyes were wide with fear, an expression she had never seen before. That was enough to make up her mind./

It should be

/...slowly. “It's dangerous.. Rukia.. Stay away.” His brown eyes were wide with fear, an expression she had never seen before. That was enough to make up her mind./

A lot of times punctuation marks disappeared so watch out for that.

Either than that, good one shot

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Loved the IchiRuki fluff!

GD

I love the concept and all of it in general, but I can't help but feel as if it was rushed. XD Not only their actions (the kiss seemed a little soon?), but how everything was presented. For example, I think you could've written a lot more with Rukia and Ulquoirra's dialogue, and maybe some insight on Rukia's side, seeing her struggle to define what Ichigo is to her.

It just seems more like you wrote the bones of the story without fleshing it out very much. :o

But, while I think it could've been quite a bit longer, I still enjoyed it! Nice job on it regardless. :)

OMG Aurry! Aurry! this is just too much for words. it's intense it's... I'm god DANGIT YAH! I'm dying here! I really am! it seems that people insist on trying to kill captain flaming noob! WHY!

Very cute fic! I agre LOVE rukia alot but I dont think shed stand a chance against Ulquiorra either Ichigo had a hard time against him Great fic though!

Wow. That was really something. I could FEEL the pain in Rukia's voice when she was hitting at him in the 4th to last paragraph. NICE WORK!

Very well written, you make me wish I'd include the Espadas in my own writings, Ulquiorra in particular sounds very fun to get inside his head and write for him and - when well written, like the case here - grants a very peculiar austere tone to the adventure. The contrast in between austere impending doom and the following emotional more teary action creates a very interesting final palette of tones to the narrative.

Just pointing out something I don't know if you made intentionally: You call Ulquiorra's flash step shunpo, while shunpo is for shinigami flash steps, the hollows' are called sonido. It's a small detail, but I felt like pointing it out in case the different nomenclature was accidental.

Good luck on the contest 8)

Take care,

Aalicia

I love the last part so touchin love the "my feet follow you whereever you go" part T T

so touching...

this is a good entry Aurry :)

and I guess you right about Ulqui

he'll just left when he felt the enemy couldn't stand him again