I really like this piece of writing. You did a scary good job capturing the immediate effects of rape.

That was so sad

I really liked this. I thought that her perspective was really explanitory about their relationship. Leave it to Sasuke to totally use her. But the fact that he raped her-well that just took it to the next level for me. Good job.

Rox

kya! this made me cry TTTT

Wow. You *went* there, and it turned out great. I really loved the last line. You might want to put in a warning at the top for what it alludes to, though, unless you think it'd ruin the...well, not suspense, but the...thought flow? Eh, hopefully you get it.

The language was really good, too. Intense first paragraph, especially.

i liked that a lot, but it was so short, oh well your story.

interesting... my GF said that after her first time she did much the same thing...

oh this was should be more then just a short story.

love it! though i do really have to say that it would've been better if it was longer