Reviews for Forgotten
darkangel0212 chapter 1 . 5/26/2011
keep up the good work
sheeiur22 chapter 11 . 11/26/2010
Great story
DuchessofSomar chapter 11 . 7/31/2010
Great story! Really enjoyed it! Cheers!
OMG chapter 4 . 11/6/2009
Edward is going to be so mad at Luke!

This is awesome! You are turning from a grasshopper to a guru yourself. Please continue!
Awesome chapter 2 . 11/4/2009
Your first Fanfic? Nice job!

I welcome you to the site. Party,Party, PARTY!

O.k. Anyway you were awesome!

Continue your writing young grasshopper!

PLZ R&R My stories and quizzes there really good! I hope. :D
Lady G 101 chapter 11 . 7/23/2009
that was a very cute story
xxAlicexBrandonxCullenxx chapter 11 . 7/17/2009
oh my gosh... i LOVED it. It surprised me and kept me wanting more.. a lot.

Sorry that you still didn't get Edward... :)
HarrisM12345 chapter 11 . 5/20/2009
So did Luke bring back her memories, or did she just remember?
ACaskettStory chapter 11 . 3/30/2009
awsome chapter bella rembers ya.
eLphaba 'voLcano' LawLiet chapter 11 . 3/25/2009
AW. You should finish it in Lukes POV. Have Bella changed and Luke do something.
Piyopuff chapter 11 . 3/21/2009
oh my gosh it's like... over! It was pretty darn cool for your first fanfic, man mine sucked... Bella never even got her memory back! Which, in turn, left room for a sequel! The sequel was probably my favorite fic I've ever written and I would so post it 'cuz I think it's pretty good, but it wouldn't make any sense at all because I would never post the first one.

I see room for a sequel here too, let's say, something along the lines of Bella gets changed but someone with an even stronger power then Luke's who knew his plan and wanted to try to get her for themselves does something to make it look like Bella lost her memory AGAIN and then trys the samething that Luke wanted to do. Ha, that was all spur of the moment so sorry if it makes little/no sense...

P.S. Don't bother feeling sorry for Alex, he doesn't desrve your pity! (and thank you for all the lovely reveiw replies!)
Piyopuff chapter 10 . 3/21/2009
haha, I love Jane, she's my favorite character from twilight (don't ask...) Okay, other then that I have so much to say that I don't know how to get it down in words and seriously just want to go on to the next chapter. But since you have an amazing story I will try to unscramble my thoughts

-chapter was amazing

-can't wait to see Edwards reaction

-Luke is frickin' awesome

-don't let the Volturi take Bella!

'til next time!
Piyopuff chapter 9 . 3/21/2009
uh-oh, Volturi alert!

Hey, guess what? 'Crestfallen' is the name of my favorite song by the Smashing Pumpkins. I knew it was a word but I didn't know you could use it in casual conversation like that! whoop! You know what, that's actaully

NOT my favorite song by them, it's actally 'Disarm' I just remembered that... it's so dark and masochistic(excuse the spelling) and amazing! I love Disarm!

Wow, I still need to know what Luke's got planned, man! He seems so darn sure of himself! I need more!
Piyopuff chapter 8 . 3/21/2009
hahaha, loved it! Don't worry, I own myself a pretty good number of evil made up characters to, and I love them to death!('cept this dude named Alex from my second FF, he was a loser and a complete jerk and was killed off after, like, 3 chapters)

I think Luke is pretty awesome, I don't like it when people hate new characters just because there evil!
Piyopuff chapter 7 . 3/21/2009
holy crap, holy crap, holy crap! I can't review I ned to go on the the next chapter!
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