I’m crying. Funniest short ever!

Oh Jesus Christ that killed me!

X'D

Oh how I would have loved to have seen Alan proclaim that to his father! This story made me laugh very hard at the end, little innocent Alan. Great story, loved it! :) xx

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH OH MY GOD THIS WAS THE GREATEST THING EVER! AWWW I WOULD HAVE LOVED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENED THEN!

Genius

Brilliant.

Loved the story. It was very cute.

Haha this one really made me laugh...its been a log while since i read thunderbirds anything so dunno how i came to read this one lol. Anyway the 'hero worship' of Scott was adorable, even the annoyance of his older brothers to that was cute. The image of the brothers running to protect each other is sweet and that fial image at the end...i can just imagine everyones faces when Alan says that and can't help but laugh out loud :) A

Perfect brotherly love fluff. THanks for the laughs, I needed a happy thought.

"Children seldom misquote you. In fact, they usually repeat word for word what you shouldn't have said" (Unknown). -Raven

hahahaha, oh my god, i can't breath for laughing. that was fantastic! i can just imagine jeff's face when that came out and what must scott have thought? haha, hilrious.

you're so good, write more soon,

blacky xox

Oh I would have loved to see Jeff's face when Alan did that.

Ow, I think I strained something! From the mouths of babes, eh?

I really love your characterisation in this: Alan's petulant attitude at being ignored is so in character, and Virgil's desire for peace and quiet is also believable - who creates masterpieces in chaos?

This was...not a good idea to read this at work. My boss wants to know why I'm giggling like an idiot right now, and the best I can do is a grin and "kids say the darndest things".

Poor Virgil, he's never going to live that one down. Not that what he did was wrong just...the result was priceless.

You know, after this day, their father isn't going to let them go anywhere alone ever again.

An amusing little portrayal of pre-adolescent behaviour. The constant "Look at me!" is so stereotypical of that age group. It's actually rather worrying how easily my son seems to fill out Alan's character.

I wasn't entirely sure about Virgil's character. He just seemed to be...'missing' something. But I know how hard it is to get a good grasp of a character's personality, so I still commend you for your success with Alan. He was perfect - in a very imperfect way, of course. Poor Virgil.

The humor was well balanced, and light-hearted enough to make me chuckle from time to time. Your written style seems very mature and detailed, and I'd love to see you handling some darker material. Perhaps you could try the boys as Thunderbirds?