This is very interesting please continue.

If u going to continue this story kaguya people could be the long lost furlings whom with use of magic and tech created the shenju trees to access cosmic life energies and to evolve themselves and ascend to god lvl powers that can rival the ancient and ori . That probably liberated the planet from the goauld.

Man get over ur self and the fucking character bashing u know very well sakura never blamed naruto and would never hurt him for that she may not live him like sasuke but she loves him like a brother . And it hurted her more to see naruto in pain than watch him destroy himself over that ahole sasuke.

Yay! I was worried that it would be discontinued. Can't wait for the new version!

oops, wrong story.

Naruto's a bit ooc with his fear of Sakura

Greetings, here's hoping that this review finds you well, and still writing! I am rather glad I took the time to read this story, I like the plot, the premise, and the story line, and if you choose to rewrite the chapters, to improve them, then I say go for it! I enjoyed reading the story and am looking forward to changes in the rewrite, or even a whole new dialogue/pathway for the entire story, and maybe if you feel inspired, a branching into other animes/mangas/movies/games/whatever, for worlds that they can visit! and also, there is actually one place on earth that Naruto and co wouldn't stand out, hehe, and that's Japan! LOL, though I don't think SGC would agree to them gallivanting half way around the world, you know? Again, looking forward to seeing more of this story, either as is, or completely revamped and continued!

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This is the chapter you killed this story.

Was interesting had loads of potential but you killed it with one paragraph.

Would have been way better without Hinata as well. Hinata pretty much is the reason for me why interesting stories become boring. Not your fault she is simply one dimensional and has very little room for growth without making her an entire new character.

Well anyway good luck with the rest if you decide to continue.

I really like this story. I hope to read more soon.

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can not wait to see you redo this story.

Glad you are going to consider continuing this story

A few suggestions for if/when you do the revamp: Keep in mind that Konoha is very much a military village, the second SG-1 came close there would be multiple people following them and Tusnade would be informed the moment they were spotted. This is for several reasons: they are wearing unknown uniforms, 3 of them showing clear signs of some form of combat training; Naruto is with them, beyond Tusnade's own feelings for Naruto he is an important individual to Konoha from a strategic standpoint. Keep in mind that Tusnade ultimately answers to the Fire Daimyō and while she has a good deal of leeway in what she can do she would have to inform him about the Stargate, not doing so could easily result in her being executed. Another issue is who Tusnade sends to the SGC; at the very least she would send a jōnin along if for no other reason than the fact that they are going to another planet and know nothing about the people there. Don't get me wrong, I love the story, I just felt I should point those things out. On an interesting side note: nothing about the canon history of Naruto needs to be altered to fit within the Stargate universe. The Ōtsutsuki Clan are stated as being aliens, it could be that the Ōtsutsuki rescued a group of humans from the Goa'uld before settling on the planet. The Shinju and chakra could easily have been an unforeseen side effect from when the Ancients reseeded life in the Milkyway. Although I do think that Hagoromo's transcendence would be different from Ascension, similar but different. Anyway, good story and I look forward to seeing where it will go from here.

love the story