| Reviews for The Forgotten |
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  LockShockBarre chapter 4 . 8/18/2018 I just finished chapter 4. *I don't like giving reviews about every chapter* this is going by crazily. Question, this is kinda weird for me to ask but, does other Wybie have his cloths on or, are they still hanging on the flagpole? Though, it wouldn't be inappropriate since he would just look like the little ghost girl's (i like to call her little lovat) doll when torn apart. Anyway, enough of my yapping! I got a story to finish! |
 writingisrelaxing chapter 6 . 5/20/2018 "With enough determination, the soul persists" DID YOU PREDICT UNDERTALE!? OH MY GOD |
| Blacksword 1 chapter 13 . 1/1/2013 That was beautiful I think the other wybie would be proud that you gave him such an end I know I would if I was him. Here lies other wybie born? died 2013 friend fighter hero may his soul rest in peace |
| Mackenzie Whited chapter 13 . 5/20/2011 Best, ending, ever! |
| Chibi inuxkag476 chapter 13 . 4/2/2010 Bah *sniff*...curse my emotional side. This was a real touching and beautiful story love. Twas real good. Oh Other Wybie...shall not be forgotten, he won't! |
| Deyinel chapter 13 . 7/29/2009 Oh my gosh! This story was absolutely excellent! You had me laughing and crying through every chapter, and the ending was just perfect! And don't let anyone tell you it's too wordy, I personally loved every description. It brought the story to life and shaped it for me perfectly. Now I'm off to read some of your other stories. Thanks for sharing. It was beautiful! |
| Dreaming-Of-A-Nightmare chapter 6 . 7/27/2009 this is so freaking genius. just saying. :D |
| traces and teacups chapter 13 . 7/8/2009 okay, you're story was seriously cool... nice idea, perfect timeline, great descriptions... only a few words for you... "I guess you have a talent" write more! |
| GingerDixie chapter 3 . 7/1/2009 ...Wow. Just, wow. This is probably one of the best stories you've written; I mean, I've heard good things about "The Forgotten", but this is amazing. Everyone's in character, the dream sequences are played out beautifully, and everything is a heaping load of AWESOME. Hmm...and you're beginning to turn me into and Other Wybie lover too... -eve94 |
| Nicktendo46 chapter 13 . 6/11/2009 The ending is so true... Awesome job! DD |
| Invader Johnny chapter 13 . 6/10/2009 Ah, I guess that explains the writting hehind the story... a nice idea I supose. Invader Johnny Signing Off. |
| Rock Raider chapter 13 . 6/10/2009 What a nice ending to this fic. I guess in the end, the Other Wybue truly was freed from the Other Mother. I only wish they could've done the same with the Other Father, but the fic wqas Other Wybie-centric, so at least you did what you wanted, & that's what counts on fanfiction. Well, anyway, see ya. |
| Invader Johnny chapter 12 . 6/9/2009 It is certanly unfair that after all the hell they went throught, our heroes lost in a way. Invader Johnny Signing Off. |
| gigi-2000 chapter 12 . 6/9/2009 WHAT? That's IT? :( I'm not sure I like the ending...hm if that IS the ending *raises eyebrow* |
| Nicktendo46 chapter 12 . 6/9/2009 Oh God, that was hard... Poor Coraline. But at least he's free. :) Can't wait for the next one! D |
