I love your story, please continue it!

oooh, I am really glad to have found this fanfic.

It's an interesting little twist on the movie, or perhaps the book (which I have yet to read)? Maybe both? Anywho, I really enjoy the changes to the plot. And with how
Other Wybie was able to break free from the Beldam -even if for a little while -. All in all, its a really good read and you paint a marvelous picture with words. I am looking forward to what happens next.

please continue this

this is really, really, really good! do you think you could please finish it? :( thx!

Please continue

HISSSSSS I DEMAND UPDATES

Beautiful!

The ending song is just perfect.

I will continue reading now :)

Been a year, but some of us still haven't given up on this.

I still re-read it from time to time, and it's still one of the best Coraline fanfictions on the site!

Think some sketches could persuade you to keep on track with this? Or if you need help with references or storyline, I'll happily give my two-pennies.

- Alice (Prev. Jadeica)

Thanks for the great read!

I can't wait until the last few chapters come out. Update soon :)

Dude, I hope you update... Whenever I see a story dropped for months for seemingly no reason, I always think, "is he/she okay?" [the author] I hope you are. o.o I'm anxious to see what Coraline and the Wybies will do next, and what's wrong with the Other Wybie?

Keep writing!

~Ashe*

I am getting INCREASINGLY infatuated with this! Poor Wybie/Other Wybie! Poor Charlie/Other Father! I can hardly stop reading long enough to leave a review, and I've found myself late for class twice thus far, caught up in all this jazz. XDD

Keep writing!

~Ashe*

Ooh, creative! Other Wybie and Real Wybie are connected...the ending song fit perfectly. :D

Keep writing!

~Ashe*

This story is freaking amazing. I've only just recently watched Coraline, and now I'm hooked on the fanfics that are posted here. Anyways, this actual thought popped up in my head while watching the movie, and I'm excited that it's being written out!

I only hope that you continue to write, because I noticed that it's been half a year since this story was updated.

I hope I see the next chapter soon! If you have the time, of course! Thank you for the suspenseful reading so far, and I love how you incorporated Coraline's parents into this as well!

~Akira

I favourited this story a while ago and promised myself I would come back to review!

This is a great story, wonderfully written and imagined. Your style is proffessional and is a pleasure to read and easy to visualise. I love how you stay true to the movie while adding so much more depth, and the way you write the Beldam is chilling and very evocative. Wonderful characterisation of Wybie and Other Wybie,their mutual feelings for Coraline, and I love the Cat's perspective and his protective feelings for his friend. Great touch also with tying in Charlie and the Other Father. Brilliant fic and I hope you're able to update soon, I'm intrigued to see what happens when they go back - and I was so happy you brought the Other Wybie back. Mr B's mice have me worried though...

Great work! :)