yrayaya

Best...half life alternate story ever...

I'm beggining to lose my sanity

it's Gordon's ghost coming back from the foot of the evil boss

this is perfect i really like it i love it heaps as much as i love humens

Greates story evarrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr!

IMO the story is more ridiculous than the youtube video..i was laughing so hard the first time i read this on ..

I don't where to start with this. Since this story hasn't been updated since 2009, I'm not even sure if this review will matter. Well, worth a shot.

This story (or chapter?) desperately needs a re-haul. Grammar and structure are not coherent, punctuation is laughably abused, and transitions are… well there are none.

The writing was so atrocious is made me laugh. If it wasn't for a youtube video by the same name I would have wondered where the writers got their hilarious material from. I can't believe it came from this.

hell no

You're one of the most well known fanfic authors ever. How do you do it?

Wow...it's so bad, it's a veritable work of art.

squirrelking, you sir are a genius.

Were this story and it's sequel to disappear from the web, I would be sad forever. My fellow humens, we must preserve these tales for future generations. Who's with me?

Real good seed almost grow up

REAL GUDD READ ALMOST BLO UP

You know what? I saw many people trying and failing miserably back in the day, but you, son... you're a natural.

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