Hey! I really like this story, the idea is neat and your way of writing leaves me on edge to find out what is going to happen next. I hope you continue this soon. All the best!

Que paso con el capitulo 9 realmente es una gran historia me gustaria terminar de leerla

This story is so great! I'm amazed about the plot, the characters' personality and how well you've written it.
A long time since I read such a marvellous story, couldn't stop reading from the begginig. Great job.
Hope you get it finished one day, I'd be glad to know how it ends!

Why did u give up

Good start can't wait to see what happens next

This is very good! The plot is intricately woven and exciting! I hope you haven't given up on it!

Wonderful story...I hope to read the rest someday!

Brilliant story and plot. You write so beautifully the story just flows

Yes! That's my nigga Jasper, lets go boy! This was so powerful I almost cried and I'm pretty sure my heart stopped. Wooh wooh I'm terrified but also strangely hyped for this. A good soldier knows when to offer up her compliments. And i am a good soldier. YAH!

Hey, why have you discontinued? It's FREAKING AMAZING! Write more already!

Please, please, your story is better then the twilight's books itself. Please keep going. Pleeease!

I think u should have a bit in the next chapter where wane finds out that Jane attacked jasper and be upset he didn't tell her

please please post more chapters it's 2014

Awe!
Ooh this is awesome! :D
Love this! :D
Can't wait the next chapter! :D

You cannot just leave it like that. They need a happy ending!