This is realy good!

This was a little darker than you usually do, but I liked the thought process behind it. It was an interesting look at the downward progression of a relationship. I got the feeling that Shane had no idea how he was changing and being influenced, but that didn't matter in the end. And I was proud of Mitchie for rejecting what the relationship had become without taking the blame for things that weren't her fault. Not sure this makes any sense, but I liked the story.

Hey!

This is (once again) awesome work.

It's really sad but I think you captured their insecurities really well.

Shane's got a big ego but he's using it to cover his insecurity.

Hm...this was intresting. I like the shifet from sweet to jealous. Kind of fits Shane's personality. And also buliding an ideal image of the girl inhis head seems like something he would do. Nice work. :)

aww. that was sad! good, but sad! i sorta like it. :/

mattie

Thats kinda sad. It read kinda like a letter from Mitchie to Shane. Unfortuanely, that's how many celeb realtionships end up. One or the other cheating. Great job!