Its so beautifully written! Surely is one of the best fanfic on this page! Loved it!

This is the best fanfic I’ve ever read!️

This was incredible, unbelievably beautiful.
I can't just put them in words how much I loved it.
Thank you so much for writing this.
Jily is one true pair for me.️

Wow! Beautifully written! Thank you!

oh wow. this was beautifully intimate, without being too smutty. This was a new take on their relationship, one I've never read before. I must say, I thoroughly enjoyed it. So beautiful and poignant and the characterization was flawless. James is already an amazing person, you just elevated him to another level. I love this James. Lily was, well, Lily. this was very, reminiscent for me, I do not know why. the writing was beautiful, almost poetic. thank you for writing this, you're insanely talented.

Absolutely beautiful! Perfect!

My new favourite fanfic

This was really good... wow ! a whole lot happened in a short amount of time and yet it still flowed nicely. Awesome :)

thIS IS BEAUTIFUL

My, this is so wonderful. I even teared whilst marveling at the simple beauty of this tale.

My favorite from you so far. Thank you.

It's so perfect. It's so god damn perfect.

So much for "purely business"

Aww, this is so cute! And oddly romantic, even though there's nothing really to point towards that direction.
You're a really good writer! (I also read "she said what?" but before I created an account) So well done, and continue writing a load of fics.

I used to read your stories years ago when I first got into fanfiction and you were one of my favorite authors, and I have to admit that coming back to this after such a long time has sent me reeling with the beauty that is your writing. I don't think I fully appreciated how wonderful your composition was back then, but it is something special, and I'm very glad I got to experience again in this way. Beautifully done, and thank you.

it was really good :-) thank you for uploading