plz keep on doing this

excelent first chapter

Oh, I think Hermione will still ask even if mad as heck at first. Who else?

This story is great! I can’t wait to read more.

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Either way, good luck with your writing!

Melora Brockert, SUM student

you need to maybe add a little detail because at the moment it is a little flat