My goodness this was so interesting...
I'm glad it didn't follow the storyline...
the little bit you've mentioned about lou's past sounds less heartbreaking, easier to stomach and very intriguing...
Boggs doesn't seem heartless.

This story is soooo good, please write more...
And I hope lou doesn't get in trouble

Very interesting. Keep up the great work. Catch ya on the flip side.

WOW! HOPE THAT"S NOT THE END! HOPE THERE"S MORE SOON BYE

LIL K

So you are intending on writing more right? (excellently written, very enticing) I'm hooked and I want to know what happens next! Don't keep your fans waiting.

I'm enjoying the story, but I'm a little confused as to who some of these characters are. Liam O'Rourke and Peter to be exact. I think I could use more background information. I understand that this in supposed to be AU, but if you were to explain your universe a bit more it would help.

YAY I'm so happy to read the next chapter. What a great story line. I can't wait for you to continue. THANKS :)

This is getting really interesting and I like the way you're writing it, plus I can't wait to see what you have in store for Lou. Keep up the good work!

yehey! you finally added the next chapter. anyway, i hope that add the next chapters faster and that you'll make them longer. keep writing! ;)

PLEASE PLEASE continue this story! I want to know what happens next! :)

i like your story! i hope you have plans to continue it. PLEASE! tnx! ;)

I love this story. PLEASE don't stop writing :)

This is GREAT, and please write more soon.

so when do we get the next chapters? soon i hope...

Wonderful Start! Please post more soon!

Great so far. Can't wait for the next part.