Wow this was really awesome! You did a good job :)

WOW is all i have got to say:O

That story was so original and unique in it's awesomess way.

I love how you made Marluxia so innocent and Larxene so independent. She is so annoyed by him but cute little Marluxia just wants to try so hard. It's touching and you totally put them in such good personalities.

It's so touching in the end and unexplainable for such a sweet oneshot. I loved it man(':

~youngwriter123

AH! I loved this story! I like how you made Marluxia act, ya know...taking her hits instead of mouthing off. I love reading MarLar stories and yours is one of my faves!

This is so sad...

Okay, not the best review ever but this story definitely deserves appreciation! I love the way you've characterised both Larxene and Marluxia (poor guy. Always getting beaten up), and the part with the rose was just so sweet