| Reviews for Turbulence |
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   satomika chapter 1 . 9/20/2014 This should have a sequel where Mamori ends up knowing whatever she blurted out Hee Cute! I've been on a plane before, but I can't remember experiencing turbulence |
| sakurenjiDREamer chapter 1 . 3/21/2011 Like. I like how he changed his reaction to her gripping when he heard that she loved him! :D |
| luvb00kw0rm chapter 1 . 12/13/2010 i have that novel, it written by Sophie Kinsella, the same author who wrote Shopaholic series. anyway, it is a great fic, hiruma just being hiruma.. hehehe |
| WritingRin chapter 1 . 9/29/2010 lol. I like the idea of this. Mamori seemed to be freaking out a little TOO much, but the /idea/ of her freaking out at the turbulence and confessing things at every bump, with Hiruma right there to write them down... that's funny. That's really funny. I liked this line though: ["Don't tease me Hiruma-kun. I seriously thought we were gonna die." She murmured.] It just sort of helped me take it more seriously or something. Anyway, I really liked Hiruma's reactions. But he should've had more of a reaction to her confession, since it's in his perspective. I mean, seriously, what does he think of that? |
| luvliness chapter 1 . 5/6/2010 ~ya! it was so funny! I L.O.L.-ed at the part where Mamori-chan said she likes Hiiruma-kun! xD |
| snowbells chapter 1 . 3/26/2010 haha,so funny yet very cute! |
| Llyhael Aquila chapter 1 . 7/17/2009 cool fic! XD i'm currently worshiping hiruma and his devilish, twisted personality, so yeah... anyway, you're an indonesian? woohoo...! XD akhirnya ketemu juga dg sesama author indonesia yg sering nulis pake english (tapi english-ku pas-pasan bgt...) ;) yoroshiku, jill-san! XD |
| BeTraYaL chapter 1 . 6/6/2009 hehe, keep reviewing don't hurt you Overall, great story..maybe you could replace "exited" with "excited"... looking for another story from you though, write more please |
| bengalzcat80 chapter 1 . 6/5/2009 waaw! funny and so romantic! I'm laughing when Mamori said she is still virgin while she was totally scare to death. hahahahaha... nice fanfic! good job! |
| odou king chapter 1 . 4/27/2009 hohoho, orang indo ya? hahaha, gak nyangka aja,, udah lama ga ke fanfic, dateng2 dah banyak orang indo-nya yang nulis,, pake bahasa indo gpp kan? (bhs inggrisku kacau banget) pertama2: AKU JUGA PENGGEMAR HIRUMAMO! kya~ seneng ya ngeliat mereka? aku suka banget ama pair ini, soalnya beda ama pair2 laen,, ok, ok,, btt! cerita yang ini bagus si, tapi ada keganjilan aja,, emang si mamori ga sadar dia ngomong gitu di depan hirumanya sendiri? yah, sisanya si ok2 aja menurutku (tapi aku ga bisa ngebayangin wajah hiruma pas meluk palanya mamori _ |
| Lady Light chapter 1 . 4/8/2009 aw I love this pairing! |
| pinchess07 chapter 1 . 3/23/2009 waah! so good! |
| Strictler Reminder chapter 1 . 3/2/2009 It's very nice; I like it. There are times when I feel uncomfortable while reading this but of course, that's just me. Nice job. |
| Shinku Amakusa chapter 1 . 3/1/2009 Yay! Another Fanfic! Looks like I missed this one... But still, I LOVE your FF very much! I'm waiting for another fic! Gambatte! v |
| Ibby chapter 1 . 2/19/2009 Cute bit of fluff. Yea, people on planes are always like "no cell phones at all, turn them off along with mp3 players, cd players, and other electronics" the fact is, if a cell phone could bring down a plane, the terrorists would have picked up on this already, so I can imagine Hiruma getting snippy with any flight attendant. And there is no way in hell Kurita fit in one seat along with Hiruma and Mamori. he would take up an entire row. |
