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Abby Queen of Caff-Pow chapter 16 . 4/22/2011 hope there's plans to continue this someday. absolutely love 3 |
fangirlxfantasies chapter 16 . 5/29/2010 wow this story is awesome! thank you for helping me cure my insomnia ;P ok i am mentally slapping myself in the face for not reading this story earlier...i hate discovering awesome stories like a year too late! anyway i hope you arn't giving up on this one, it is way too good not to finish! p.s. (reviewing every chapter at once) jeff/adam moments are beyond sweet, i totally squeeled when jay and matt finally got together, and psyco randy is an epic success! also loved all the little jokes you threw in from edge's promo that monday, but how could you leave out failure turtles? lol :P |
GrandpasGuitars chapter 16 . 2/7/2010 I'm late, but whatever. HAPPY BIRTHDAY! :) LOL at Hunter reading slash. And the pairing names just made me laugh. I dunno why, I know them, but it made me laugh. And thanks. It's an honor to be mentioned in a fic like this. Uh oh, things don't look good for Morrie. Poor guy, this won't end well for him. (hugs Mor) You poor victim you. And love the Misty sex. Yum |
BellaHickenbottom chapter 16 . 2/6/2010 I love when they talk about Fanfics! It just makes me giggle thinking what would happen if they ever did find out what was on here *yikes* I loved the little argument over which Hardy was better and which canadian was better! SAVE JOMO! |
Dark Fae Angel chapter 16 . 2/5/2010 HAPPY BIRTHDAY! My prezzie to you, the 20 pound cat who just decided to sleep on my chest. But seriously *Huggles* Oh my god this just made me crack up so bad. From the mustard fight, to the fanfic references (I hope Addy was reading your stuff by the way. He'd prolly get a kick outta 'Captive' and "Troubles") and even Hunter's disturbing fasination with Hardycest. And there was hot shower play, you just know how to make me smile. I really hope nothing bad happens to Mor though. LOVE YA! P.S. I think Addy knows we want him to fued with Punk. |
moonsaultsandmischief chapter 16 . 2/5/2010 Uh, love that they had a little slash lesson. Don't you just wonder what their conversation would be like if they did know about slash. And Im with Matt, mustard is evil and yucky. Matt's getting more agressive, I like it. :) p.s Happy Birthday |
Ambrosealley88 chapter 16 . 2/5/2010 Happy Birthday! :) This chapter was great. I love the whole fanfiction discussion. Poor Mor though...hopefully someone gets to him and stops Randy from hurting him too much. |
NeroAnne chapter 16 . 2/5/2010 LOL, mustard torment. Oh, the horror. XD! Story: Hehe, they're bored! Poor babies. Matt would be the overprotective dude that he is. XD! HAH! He's in bed with Jay-Jay! XD! Awe! Is Jay ASLEEP? XD! Que cute! And Matty KNOWS he isn't watching the news. He's SO jerking Jay off under the covers. XD! A LEASH. DO it! XD! WOOT! The Jeff giggles, XD! Makes Addy wake right up! TOO SCURRED of MATT. XD! Teh big brother. XD! HE DID. He told Jeff he LOVED him. XD! Oh, Matt! Such a shy dude, XD! *Reads on* LMAO! Matt threw a shoe at Jeff's ass! XD! I love it. LOL, XD! Matt so wants to join! HAH! XD! Rib at Jay! He's sexy. HARDYCEST is GOD. When they realize that, things will get better. XD! _ Adam knows he loves it! AND so does Hunter! WOOT! Hehe, XP! "Adam just wants to go read it." XDD! *reads on* XD! WOOT! SYWALTOTE! XD! AND SERAPH! XD! Oh yeah. They're BOTH fanfic sluts if you look at it clearly. XD! They really aren't. Damn blonde Canadians. Thinking the Hardy'z are theirs. XD! Haha, a sound reason! Hehe, XP! Kisses. Oye! Not fair! if Adam can't fuck up Jeff then Matt can't fuck up Jay! XD! *Reads on* Matt's awesome at glaring, XD! What a tattletale, XD! Jeff's gonna make Matty eat the mustard? XD! Oh no! And the truths are revealed! XD! LMAO! "I'm telling dad!" XD! HAHAHAH! Jeff is just strong that way, XD! Poor Matty! XD! YHEY! Jedam time! BE JEALOUS, Adam. Hunter likes reading my shit, XD! LMAO! HAH! XD! I'm partial to that one too! XD! OH YES. XD! So curious, Adam! XD! He needs to be zipped! *reads on* Sleep, how cute! He is a child! XD! He knows no better! XP! Haha, XD! He got called a rat. Oh hell yeah. It's cuz Matt's the ultimate DOM. And he gets what he wants because he is Matt FUCKING Hardy! XD! That's the reason WHY. Awe, XD! They're so cute! Well, duh. Mustard is sour... JUST PLAY! XD! They are so fucking hot together...even when wet! XD! Alright! Hottness! XD! I loved. Oh..poor Morrie... YHEY! XD! HAPPY BIRTHDAY! |
takers dark lover chapter 16 . 2/5/2010 This was really funny and love the shower scene. And I thought them talking about fanfic was a scream. Poor Morrie I fell so bad for him. Randy must be stopped. HAPPY BIRTHDAY! |
Esha Napoleon chapter 16 . 2/5/2010 1) Happy Birthday ;) 2) As soon as I saw the name of this chapter, I busted out laughing! 3) Hot steamy shower scene- LOVE IT! 4) poor Mor :-( |
LegacyChick chapter 16 . 2/5/2010 Oh oh oh... I so wanna know what Randy's up to... and what kinda part Cody and Ted will have in it *smirks* |
takers dark lover chapter 15 . 10/19/2009 Oh no not John! What is Randy going to do to him? |
BellaHickenbottom chapter 15 . 9/29/2009 Gawd, I didnt know it was possible but ur causing me to hate Orton more and more in each chapter. Adam is such a lil girl LOL. Mattys lil inner thoughts about Jay were so adorable! Mor, when you get out, RUN! Ur in better shape then all of em, just run for whoevers room is closest! DONT HURT MOR! |
NeroAnne chapter 15 . 9/28/2009 LMAO! XD! Mor head-banging to "Low" XD! I want to see that so bad! XD! JEFF! XD! YAY! Mor and Jeff are friends! XD! Hehe, XD! They're so cute together! Hehe, XD "WRONG!" XD! LMAO! Haha, I like Jeff trying to get John's attention! XD! *Reads on* Jeff is like the mom, XD! "Mind your brothers, Adam!" XD! What the hell? Why did Adam scream!1 He scared Matt! Poor JoMo! He was left hanging! ...You scared the ever loving SHIT out of me just for a little SPIDER? XD! Haha, XD! If it were a praying mantis I would understand, but a cute spider? "All nonchalant and care-free was this demon thing." ...LMAO! HAHAHAH! I can't breath! XD! Watch out Addy! XP! *Reads on* Hehe XD! They're all so mean to Addy! XD! That is so damn funny! I can't stop giggling! Do it, Jay! XD! Awe, Matt misses his Addams. No, it wasn't.. Mor is so cute, worrying over his boys. Poor Morisson, it wasn't his fault, he didn't know! Dangerous and stupid. Bad combination, XD! ...Oh my..NO NO NO! Legacy kidnapped Mor! *Reads on* All the way to TNA. DAMN! "Honey, you lost that shit when you started screaming like a little girl over a spider." XP! XD! Matt knows he wants to watch! Everyone does! I knew it was Legacy...dammit all! Evil idiots! Ugh. Mor did the right thing, Orton is a shmuck. Randy's gonna rape Mor? Awe..poor Mor.. Update soon! |
GrandpasGuitars chapter 15 . 9/28/2009 Morrison should always dance to Low. (drools) Now that they're all friends, their meetings are so much more awesome. Adam afraid of spiders... I can see that. Matt going caveman... awesome. I loved this chapter! (As always, but I must repeat it) PS- No, Adam owns no one. It's his fault. After that video from the hospital when he was talking to Chris, with his hair in that weird ponytail, I think I took him less seriously as a top just then. |