Even though it's literally been a decade since this story was updated, I still hold a little bit of hope that we'll get one someday :') love this story

Hello, I really enjoyed this story. I know it has been here for a long time but it sure would be great to read about what happens when CJ wakes up! Think about finishing it.

I doubt this is the same year as post-Zoe’s kidnapping given that you say it’s 1998 and Abbey isn’t yet a First Lady but you say it’s Tempus 2 months etc. I suspect there’s supposed to be a 5 or 6 years bit added to that date before the 2 months part! Please check this bit. Otherwise a fab story so far thanks :-)

I know it has been years and you may not even use this account anymore, but can you please update.

This story is so awesome. I know you've probably completely stepped away from it, but consider this review as one more pleading, begging message from a huge fan, asking you to keep working on it beyond chapter 28! Seriously, I stayed up crazy late reading it last night (horrible sleepy day at work because of it), thought about it all day (envisioning possible future chapters that I need you to write!), came home and am reading the whole thing again!

As a CJ fan, this is killing me.

But I'm excited to keep reading.

I really enjoy Abbey's internal voice. You shed some light on the frustration she must feel as a strong, opinionated, brilliant, compassionate person who just happens to be "the wife" of the most powerful leader on the planet.

I think you capture her well. Also, you're right about the pace of the secret service...there is something reserved and procedural about Ron and the crew, even though they have to snap into action at times.

Thanks for writing!

Me again. So now I've read all the fics you have posted here, including this one. I love your writing. It has been so long since you posted that I doubt you'll read this, but thank you for the excellent stories.

Great story

Please update

Would love it if you could update this story. I really enjoyed reading it and would love to know how things turn out and who the bad guys are.

Just cought up with you and wanted to let you know I loved this!

(particularly the relationship between CJ and Mrs B)

thanks for sharing and hope you get a change to post again soon

xLx

I've loved the story so far - can't wait to read the rest!

Thanks for the update! Eagerly awaiting to hear how everything comes together.

This update made my day! I love this story and was hoping that it hadn't been abandoned! Please know you have many loyal readers out there that are anxiously looking forward to your updates! Well done, and keep up the good work!

HAPPY NEW YEAR!

So glad you are back with a new chapter and the length of this chapter almost makes up for the abscence! I hope you continue writing and finish this story even if it takes months for a chapter update.

Thank you for writing and creating!

I just got into this story and it's great so far. I like the structure of jumping back and forth, and CJ's friendship with Abbey is really poignant. Hope you keep updating!