That was absolutely hilarious! Just had to google OAP-must be a British term,

Oh My God! LOL!

That is really quite awesome!

I LOVE the bit where Sarah Jane goes, "I'm glad to see you can count!"

MAJOR LOL

Brilliant. Poor Sarah-Jane! Yeah she definately would be the coolest O.A.P on the planet. It's nice that you've got all of the characters spot on! Good job. LL

LOL I was laughing and repeating things in this story... SUPER FUNNY

This was hilarious! I really enjoyed this a lot. I love Clyde's comment about a sonic walking stick! ahh, lol! Clyde's just too hilarious. Oh, but where's she going to put that car sticker without the whole world thinking her mad? maybe she could stick it to Mr. Smith? I'm sure he wouldn't mind (not)!

:D

great story, every character exactly how they should be (and she looks fantastic for 60!)

What fun! I am SO in awe of Sarah Jane! As a 50-something lady myself, she is such an inspiration. A sixty-year-old female 5'4" action hero! YES! Long may she continue to battle the aliens! I just wish they'd get season 2 (and 3 for that matter) out on DVD already!

Really cute. I think you got their personalities brilliantly. I like the speed of the dialogue, it's really realistic.

nice i like it but what does O.A.P stand for