Reviews for Detentions
teddylupin-snape chapter 2 . 10/5/2012
I really love this, the whole detention thing! I was curious whether you'd be interested in maybe writing something with the actual detentions? Not all, obviously, if you can't come up with something (which is exactly why I myself haven't done something like that)...Just a suggestion...

But I do really love this, I've been looking for a good detention fic for a really long time, believe it or not...
pensiveaddict chapter 1 . 5/3/2012
It was pretty good. But sometimes, the Marauder language can make things a little difficult to understand, with too many pronouns. But it was mostly well-written. The ending seemed to lack the punch. If you have the time, you could rework it. I loved Moony's lines; bloody brilliant they were.
Princess Shania chapter 6 . 8/1/2011
Did YOU ever get caught?
undecided1996 chapter 8 . 6/24/2011
i love this fic haha epeially te first chappie ehheeh write more sooon plzzzzzzzzz
StarKid McFly chapter 8 . 1/18/2011
I love this so much! :D
anana553 chapter 1 . 11/26/2010
*keeps laughing for a while*

good job and nice chap one )
Allibella731 chapter 7 . 9/21/2010
It was hilarious!

Perfect portrayal of all of the characters! Keep writing!
dork-with-glasses chapter 8 . 8/8/2010
This is bloody brilliant! Honestly, I love this story. It's witty, in-character and just a fantastic read. The idea is really good too and you've pulled it off really well. It's amazing! I can't wait for more!
morfoulaassi chapter 8 . 7/17/2010
hilarious...
lollipopsicle chapter 8 . 4/4/2010
ahahaha, this is brilliant! i was laughing soo much during this :P

i love how you make james and sirius so awesome :D

xoxox
Gadhudaj chapter 8 . 2/9/2010
Just finished all eight chapters!

I thinks this story is amazing!

Can you please write some more?
Gadhudaj chapter 5 . 2/8/2010
This story is AMAZING! PLEASE write more! I can't wait to find out what other things James and Sirius have gotten up to!
Irrelevancy chapter 8 . 2/8/2010
Beautiful~~

xD
OhtarIstar666 chapter 8 . 2/8/2010
I always wanted ringlet nose hair. Not really, but it would be cool. They should of done it Snape! He has a huge nose. Think how awesome the ringlets would be!
LuckyRosepetal chapter 8 . 2/8/2010
Oh, this chapter is so funny. Their god mood is contagious, I can't stop smiling!
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