Amazing story. I really enjoyed it. Absolutely loved it. Thank you for sharing this with us

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To chapter 3...I say awesome!
To the A/n after it I say LOL!

Interesting chapter and plot and idea

Well, an unsettling final twist to what was a great story. Don't know if your writing career ever took off; I hope it did

Wow, what a twist. But forget the twist. What a great story. To see Chuck and Sarah reverse rolls like this is interesting to watch. Loved seeing the story get to the point where Sarah was constantly looking to Chuck to make decisions. If you are a reader, you want to give this one a try.

I know it happens but the screwing Arnoud shouldn't have happened. I don't care if the mission called for it or not. I can't even imagine how I would feel if I was Chuck. They even stole the video. So why not just tranq the guy pour some wine around and break the camera.

Jesus Sarah is literally a CIA whore in every one of your stories, it's ridiculous.

Excellent story. I hope that whatever novels you have written have done well for you.

I found your stories via the Chuck This blog, one of the stories was recommended by atcDave. I quickly finished it and enjoyed it so I read ALL of your Chuck stories. Some were dark and Sarah/Chuck did things that I did not expect from them, at least the TV version. But each story was riveting! I was hooked and no matter how dark they got, I had to finish. I know this review is too late for your novel, hope that went well and perhaps when you have some spare time, you come back to Chuck just like Sarah always does.

Really loved this story, and all your other ones. Please come back to fanfiction! I know its been years, but still come back!

Very enjoyable story! Your plot was intriguing throughout, and you worked in a lot of great elements. I especially liked the aspect of Sarah being a twin and reconnecting with her mother and sister. Definitely didn't see the ending coming, but I thought it was great! Best of luck with your novel :)

Well good luck with your book. It's been amazing reading all of your stories, two weeks, missing asset, CIA assassin and this of course have all been some of my favourite stories.

Although for the sake of clarity could someone tell me if what happened at the end of this story was that everything that happened in the hallucination actually came to happen...

Nick

I'm realy enjoying it! A definite "yes!"

love the story! i was a little surprised about how the entire thing was a dream for Sarah but that fact made it 100 times more interesting, i am going to read the rest of your words and review as many as I can! great writing and word choice...A

OMG! my fav. this was the best i love love love the ending