Reviews for The Prank |
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Void of Shining Darkness chapter 1 . 4/10/2013 HahahahahahahzhahahahahahahahahahahahHahaahahahHah ahahfinaly the ares cabin gets what they deserve |
PurpleTardis591 chapter 1 . 3/10/2012 I don't think that Annabeth or Percy would do that. Space out your paragraphs more. Wasn't my favorite story, but I think it was pretty good. |
Miasaki chapter 1 . 7/26/2009 AHAHAHAHHA! OMG! I laughed for like, 2 hours! that prank was AWESOME!1 I feel like drawing that into a graphic mini comic! |
veryannoyed chapter 1 . 5/19/2009 haha that was funny |
DistractedButSerious chapter 1 . 3/26/2009 Oh my gosh, it was so good and I'm glad I finally read Percy Jackson so I could understand it. haha |
Aish Sheva chapter 1 . 2/15/2009 Eh. It's okay. You need to divide it up into more paragraphs, though, and Percy and Annabeth are both OOC. |
Silvered Rae chapter 1 . 2/15/2009 Okay...I could see Percy and Annabeth doing something like this, yet the whole thing just seemed a tiny bit OOC... I would space your paragraphs out just a bit more and add some dialogue. It was an original idea though! Good job on that! |