I will not read anything that you write again. Will never get those wasted hours back!

I didn't see that coming. Not at all. I don't imagine an ending, when I start reading. But this one! My god, it's so sad. I love the story but I don't like sad endings. And to have Charlie find them.. is heartbreaking.

I loved this entire story and the honesty behind ppd. But the ending just killed me.

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I got to chapter 5 and was happy, I really needed a happy story to put a smile on my face, but then I read the reviews regarding the ending. I'll definitely still read this but maybe in a few days when I can handle and ending like that without breaking down, but thanks for writing this, I've enjoyed what I've read so far.

how could you make him die? and just days before their wedding! why?! whyyyyyyy !

lol, I love the hulk so I just thought that it was a funny connection to make!

Loved it quick question is this a non vamp story

Omg i cant believe he died after everything was just wrking out for them!

Not sure about it, but I will give it a try...

I'm sitting here crying! The story is really good but I don't think you should have made Edward die x

Awh no poor Bella gutted Edward had to die an just before there wedding too... Very sad

I feel completely heartbroken at the end of this story. But you know what, that just shows me how good it was that I could read this in a few hours and feel such a strong connection to the characters at the end of it is incredible. Genuinely very impressed, takes a lot of balls to love and mould your characters and then to let them go. As a fellow writer, I know. Congratulations on an awesome story - and if it's your passion - keep writing and get yourself published!

I'm sorry for saying this because this was otherwise an amazing story and I absolutely loved it (it's been a long time since I've read good fanfics) but it died with the ending. I understand it's style or whatever but I can't read any more of it knowing what's gnna happen at the end (yes I cheated a little and looked ahead but when I saw that...I just can't read it. As dramatic as this sounds, it's just too emotionally heart wrenching).

I really like this fanfic but don't you think it is just a tad too dramatic at times