| Reviews for Forgotten |
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boredom chapter 6 . 9/25/2015 ) good job! by da way it is not boredom it's audzie-chan |
Lancedark chapter 10 . 10/22/2013 Hello there! Been reading a lot of stories and I was happen to stumble with your story, I see on the comments section that the last post was from last year... I got intrigue on lots of reviews and favs and all I can say is your story was great! It was really good and I really enjoy reading the whole chapters. But just like many people said about the Chapter 10, it was kinda hurry but don't mind anyway it still fits. Keep up the good work! |
Lance58 chapter 10 . 11/15/2012 sweet.. i want though i think somethings missing.. its kinda fast.. :/ but i like your story and the idea.. was kinda thinking your going to end up waking miyu back to the past.. where she saw her future XD lol.. that kinda twist hopefully you make more |
Dandy352 chapter 10 . 4/7/2011 You can make the narration deeper, more exciting...if you have time that is. It's a good plot :) |
Dandy352 chapter 1 . 4/6/2011 Close friends really, thanks to them you'll get free services! :D But the best part, it's because you know they care sincerely. |
khatzdaax3 chapter 1 . 8/2/2010 very nice story! ) |
pixelmobster chapter 10 . 1/14/2010 what's the meaning of this words in your story? Of course I kept my word about Seiya’s involvement or else only "Kami" knows what would have happened. |
Kaori-cchi chapter 10 . 6/3/2009 Hey there, sorry I wasn't able to review for all the chapters... Though I have to say that the last chapter is very inspiring and I'm so very glad that Miyu has her memories back :) Thanks again for the good read! |
reviewer chapter 10 . 6/2/2009 It was great! Though it was kinda rushed. It might have been better if you made Seiya try to woo Miyu more before giving up but still, it was great. Hoping to see more of your works in the near future! Bye! |
LunaxXmoongoddessXx chapter 10 . 5/31/2009 awe that was just beautiful, it really was. i loved reading this fic definately good |
kazeyukiryusama chapter 10 . 5/30/2009 That's very rushed... I'm quite disappointed with the result. It actually came from "What the hell, why it suddenly end?" and so on _ It doesn't mean that I'm disappointed at you, it's just the story. Sorry if this review seems harsh...I didn't intended it to be that way. Just want you to become a better writer... warm regards, kaze |
j0nsbdaniansRock1 chapter 10 . 5/30/2009 im not satisfied! hey this is my opinion ONLY |
jdcocoagirl chapter 10 . 5/29/2009 this is much better version and its much clearer... great job. |
CrushedLove chapter 10 . 5/29/2009 Don't be hard on yourself, this was a very well planned story! I'm glad I got to read it, and it's one of the few stories that had a meaning in them. ;) I'm glad Miyu got back her memories, I didn't expect Seiya to be behind all this though! XD It was totally not within my line of thought. So that was a good twist. Kanata would have killed him if he had known, literally... I've watched 1 Litre of Tears! It was so heartbreaking! I was crying but not forcing myself to, which might not be the right thing to do... ;P Nodame Cantabile will surely cheer you up, it's such a sweet and funny drama. XD Good job with Forgotten! Congratulations on finishing it! ) CL |
solusviscus chapter 10 . 5/29/2009 I'm glad everyone have their happy ending.. Congrats..D |