I'm a few years late, but woahohahaoh! That had me from the get-go. What a ride. I'd like to know what happens after that. Snap. Terrifying!

The creepy glass, fairies were a nice touch (along the lines of Chucky). One could almost quote Sarah and Hoggle about fairies AND dolls, "'I thought they did nice things…', 'Heh. Shows how much you know.'" Fairies seems so innocuous, like dolls, until you imbue them with evil, rip-you-to-shreds characteristics. Yeee.

Sorry, still geeking out about how creepy this was.

Would you mind giving my lil' fic a look? Don't mind the first chapter. (I mean, read it; but keep reading.) The 1st chapter is just an attention grabber. :)

Oh, I liked this story! It was interesting to read and well written, I think I'll watch the sequel.

That was brilliant! I wish you could have written a bit more about what happened when sarah actually returned to the labyrinth ... But despite that it was an excellent read :)

so good can't wait for more!

Yay for new chapter! Please keep up the great work!

An attention grabbing chapter!

What? No more? You have a delightfully wicked Jareth. His expressions and movements fit in very well with how he might have been since he was spurned. But I do have to say, I'm disappointed that it didn't go on into what happened in the Labyrinth.

This is interesting, and cool. Keep smiling. :-)

I'm turning the pages quickly here and again I'm at a road block. You keep ending in cliffhangers. Jareth, what are you hiding under your malice?

please continue. i want to know what happens.

Oh wow so good! keep it up!

An interesting chapter, and Jareth is down right evil this chapter! It's a nice change!

OMG WOW that was short but really intense! Love it! Is Jareth going to stay nasty? cant wait to read more!

Many Thanks

Carrie x

That was unexpected. Interesting. Was the owl Jareth? Keep smiling. :-)

An interesting, and attention grabbing chapter!