Now THIS is a MUCH better show of Ichigo's feelings and true personality. All you had to do was add a scene or two like this in Keeping Cupid Busy and the fic would have been perfect!

-HM

fun!

omg i love this story plz right more and thank you for reading one of mine

LOL! I loved the "death stares" - my favorite line! I think you captured the wonderful silliness of the rivalry between the Pineapple and the Strawberry perfectly. Loved Rukia's ability to use the boys' stupidity against them, too. Made me wonder who the "dummies" were...;-)

Great job with the editing and the back and forth banter/dialogue between characters. Made me smile.

Thanks for the nod, too!

Lex

HAHAHHAHA, this was a riot! VERY well done; the dialogue was snappy and IC, and I LOVED what you did with Renji's little speech about academy instructors! Omg, that totally changed the tone and made it SO much more 'Renji' - WELL DONE! The ending was adorable of course; yes, Rukia, the woman IS always supposed to be treated. :P

The only concrit I have this time...is in the A/N, actually. Hehhe, it's ONH, not OHN. XD

FABULOUS! Keep writing, you've got some mad skills in there just waiting for a chance to shine!

(PS - SO sorry I didn't review this earlier; somehow I didn't hve you on author alert? ACK! Problem fixed.) XP

Ha ha lol Hilarious!

Hilarious! I read 'Keeping Cupid Busy', and enjoyed it, but there were parts where I thought Ichigo was a bit OOC. This, on the other hand, was perfect characterization for all three of them.

Plus, I love the fact that you made Ichigo only suck at Kido because he has too much energy, and that once he got the hang of controlling his power, he was able to learn. So many people say he's bad at everything but swinging a sword, and that's that, and they don't take into account that he's usually a pretty quick learner.

Great story!

Haha, that was cute! It's always nice to see those three just interacting like that. Nice little oneshot, I enjoyed it immensely! :3