| Reviews for The Wedding |
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ultimateTORINOR chapter 3 . 1/1/2010 Touching, funny, a little sad...your story is all of these things and that makes it an excellent story in my book! Great job! I also liked how you paired up all the characters! |
The Science Nerd chapter 3 . 12/3/2009 Very excellent, epic story here! I loved it a lot, it's super unique and most of the other pairings were cool! I like how you paired everyone up. And I liked the twist with Eva at the end, it added so much drama to the story! I was actually excited and nervous while reading that part! And I did feel a bit bad for Noah and Lindsay, but I hope they get their happy ending, I guess that's to our imaginations, huh? I thought Cody/Izzy was the most interesting pairing. I liked reading about that, so unique. Well, I'm happy that Ezekiel and Bridgette tied the knot, lol. And the did get a happy ending so I'm happy. Well, very nice work! I liked it, a whole lot. I've officially become an insane fan of your stories! You are the queen of fanon. Good job! -Science Nerd |
Jacob-Bella chapter 3 . 10/7/2009 Well, I'm not the best at giving long, detailed reviews, but I'll try my best. I loved this cute, little story! Ezekiel/Bridgette is so cute and I loved the Noah/Linday, but felt kind of bad for Lindsay because of how her parents felt, but it was great that she loved Noah so much to marry him. And Eva having her baby at the time was well, unexpected actually, but a great, original plot twist. And I loved the cute, happy ending. And on random note, the other side pairings were pretty nice, loved them. I hope I'm not asking too much when I ask for the possibility of a sequel? It would be nice to read more. I hope that was long enough, I'm no good at leaving good reviews, like I said. But this was nice, I loved it. Great job! |
Darkened-Inferno chapter 3 . 7/23/2009 This was such a sweet little story. I loved it. Ezekiel/Bridgette is such a cute couple. I really enjoyed this story because I also loved all of the side pairings. I was a little worried with all the drama that was going down and when Chris showed up. I'm also glad you didn't have a lot of Courtney, that was a great move. Anyways, I'm so glad that everything went well. I was so nervous wih Eva giving birth, I was just wondering if all would be okay. I felt bad for Noah and Lindsay, but at least they got their happily ever after, or it's implied at least. I loved all the Cody/Izzy too, so cute! Well, there's a lot of stuff I loved about this story. Well, I loved this story to death, so cute, romantic and well written. Winter-Rae, your writing is pure genuis! :) -Drago- |
Space Oddlty chapter 3 . 4/10/2009 And finally, I'm done reading the last chapter. It’s a bitter sweet moment actually. This was so great, but all good things must come to an end I guess. So, you said you would like a wrong review, let’s see if I can top my last one, I doubt it though, but for you, anything! At first when I read about rain I thought Bridgette would be upset, but nope! Rain can’t ruin her parade or wedding, you know what I mean. The storm was just Mother Nature’s way of wishing her luck! It’s a sign Bridge, it’s a sign! “I’M GETTING MARRIED TODAY!” would be an interesting alarm to wake up to everyday! I loved everyone’s reactions to it too. LeShawna falling off the couch and Duncan and Izzy screaming that “they’re coming for them” and that they’ll “never take her alive.” That’s so Duncan and Izzy, great work there Winter. I loved what Harold said about coffee and Gwen. Coffee stat, ah, sounds like me, yes I drink coffee, iced, but I consider it coffee. Oh Duncan, you lucky dog! You’re the one who had to wake up Noah. He obviously isn’t a morning person, but Lindsey is? I wouldn’t suspect her to be a morning person. Izzy, you little “perv” you! “Cody and Izzy are next!” I don’t really want to know what’s going on in the bathroom there. Duncan and LeShawna’s advice was funny. Putting the toilet seat down, yeah, that’s a given rule. One of the principles of marriage if you will lol. I bet it would take a lot to separate Zeke and Bridgette. Ah Courtney, you should keep your mouth shut, they won’t be listening to you anytime soon and look they didn’t. Chris at the hair salon wasn’t a surprise, but I agree, he may be stalking them, does he have a life or a hobby? Doubt it. Poor unfortunate stylist that got Eva and Izzy. Eva seemed to get mad about the whole uni-brow thing and Izzy is anyone’s worst nightmare if she has to stand still. I like the stylist’s comment about wanting to shave Izzy’s head. Oh I can imagine the girl’s hair, they sound pretty. This next scene by far was one of my favorites to read, it was so funny Winter! Zeke threatening to shave his head, very funny and then Duncan complying with it, lol. Yes, it’s time to call in Justin! I loved Justin and Noah’s argument, hilarious! And it was funny when Justin did all that work on Zeke’s hair and it was exactly the same. Yeah models can do that I guess. If he did it, I agree with the guys, it had to be different somehow. Bridgette, I bet she does look pretty. Everyone says it so often, how can it not be true, lol? It was nice to see Geoff, Katie, Sadie and Owen one more time. Salim Kaden? Cool names, if I’m pronouncing them right, they sound alike too! :D Olga VonTussle? Oh man, she sounds funny and as mean as Chef. And I know Chris is planning something, I don’t know what, but he is. Eva giving advice to Bridgette? I didn’t expect that, but it’s nice to get support from unexpected places I guess. And Eva’s attempt to be funny was actually funny! Bridgette isn’t the divorcing type, but the possibilities that Eva put up are funny. Aw, Duncan offering to walk Bridgette down the aisle, that’s so sweet and nice. It was also nice to see him apologize too; I always knew Duncan had a soft spot somewhere deep down for her. Oh Izzy, objecting to the wedding! That’s so her, I knew she would speak up somehow, but then I laughed when she glared at the crowd, funny stuff there. Preacher man, funniest part of the chapter so far Winter-Rae! The wedding was beautiful and so well written. Most people don’t write weddings correctly sometimes, but I must say you nailed it perfectly! If I was there I may have of shed a tear myself. Noah and Duncan crying, I didn’t expect that, nicely done, writing the unexpected. The vows were beautiful and their kiss, I simply just sighed and said “aw.” No joke, it was so cute and romantic! Oh no! Eva having her baby right then, I don’t know how that’ll turn out, I was on the edge of my seat while reading the whole last half, I was nervous to see how it ended, great work writing the drama. Take that Chris! I hope that hurt! Rock on Eva! And Duncan realizes Noah and Lindsey are gone, took him long enough. They’re off to elope! Good luck to ‘em! Eva’s baby in trouble? Oh no! Tyler, you better get in there soon, I don’t think Eva will be very willing without you in there! And Chris televised the wedding? Ugh that…that…that I can’t even say it right now I’m so ticked off! He deserved everything Eva did to him and I wish she did more to him! Hate him so much! I’m so happy to see Eva give birth! It’s a girl, how cute, good for them, congrats Tyler and Eva! :D I loved Heather’s comment about her and DJ adopting instead of giving birth to them, really funny Winter, it’s so Heather. I don’t know how DJ will work with that, but I think that captured Heather perfectly without making her mean, so nice one! And Izzy gets her bouquet! Just another to add to her collection. I wonder if she’ll just keep hers when she and Cody get married, that seems like Izzy. The ending was awesome! I love how you just left it to imagination. My ending would just be them living happily ever after, lol, sappy I know, but the ending seems to fit them. Like I said before, very bitter sweet, so sad this had to end, but loved every second of it. Winter-Rae, your work is just awesome! I loved this fic and I hear you’re planning on writing more or a sequel! I do hope you do, this was just awesome! The happy ending, the wedding, the romance, drama and especially the humor was all great! I hope this review was long enough for you. YOU made me fall in love with Ezekiel/Bridgette, I’m dying for more of them! Great work! :D Your friend, The Dark Keybearer |
Space Oddlty chapter 2 . 4/8/2009 And now the review for the great chapter two comes! Another fine chapter you wrote here Winter! I was so happy reading it, I smiled through most of it actually, save for the ending when they got sick, lol. Anyways, on with the review! I was surprised it took Harold and Zeke to convince the guys to have a day off to themselves! They’re lucky they agreed, I bet those girls, Bridgette specifically wouldn’t be happy if they had to work; I bet that would’ve stressed them more! Ah yes, the famous divide and conquer strategy! Nice choice Noah, nice choice indeed. And now Cody knows about the “secret” engagement between Noah and Lindsey! Poor Cody! I feel for ya, but don’t worry! I bet Noah would send you pictures or something, lol. The flashback was sort of happy/sad! I was overjoyed that Lindsey and Noah were happy together, but being rejected by parents, ouch! That’ll hurt! Poor them, but if they’re happy, it’ll all work out for them! The whole cake store scene was just hilarious! The “perfect pair” was pure genius! I thought after saying it was an ugly cake, it would end up Zeke and Bridgette’s that would’ve been funny, but it was still funny anyways! Of course Noah finds it corny, that’s the kind of sarcastic guy he is! I do wonder what his and Lindsey’s cake will look like…The possibilities, lol. Aw, Tyler you klutz! I hope they didn’t make him pay for it on his own! It was an accident, I feel for ya Tyler! *hugs Tyler* But, that was funny, and the baker seemed pretty ticked off! Way to go, ticking off the baker! That didn’t make much sense, but I’m too lazy to change it. Beach theme of course! I should’ve suspected that when you first described their cake! But no, being the idiot that I am I couldn’t figure that out until Zeke said it himself! Stupid me. That flashback with Gwen and Harold was hilarious! Gwen buying flowers? I couldn’t see that, but it’s great to know she cares for Harold! I love them together now! I died laughing when I read this: “She said she gets home before him and waits in their bed with nothing on.” Pure genius Winter! Probably the funniest line of the chapter! But it was nice to know Harold was thinking about more than that! Bridgette’s gown sounds really pretty! I can see it now actually! Her walking down in that, I would kill to actually see that, lol. Oh no! Poor Bridge! I feel so sorry for her! It seems as though this is still turning out bad for her! I hope Zeke can help her in the next chapter! She seems so upset, I hear for ya Bridge. We all love ya. Gwen has an idea, I wonder what. Zeke, you care a lot for Bridge! I love that about ya! I laughed when he jumped to Heather. Old habits die hard I guess, eh? I do love how they care for each other and all! It rocks really, plain and simple way to put it. Chris? You caught me there! I wonder what he and Chef want now! If he appears and starts talking about televising their wedding or another season, I swear to God I’ll scream! That man needs to learn to butt out sometimes! I hope he was just being nice, buying these girls the afternoon, the card sounded convincing, but I’m not so sure yet. Izzy, you little mud wrestler you! The flashback with Cody was cute too! There C-Unit again! I love that nickname for him, it fits. And the complaint from the neighbor was funny too! It’s just like Izzy to ignore that, lol. And now another one knows about the “secret” engagement. Is it just coincidence that Izzy and Cody know about it and they’re a couple? I don’t think so, but I could be wrong! I’ll have to keep reading. And Izzy, I bet you love your collection of bouquets. I hope after Bridgette and Zeke’s wedding you can add another to your collection! I knew Eva would be suspicious of Tyler! He should’ve just come out with it, it seems too hard for him to keep shut about it, so I bet either he or Eva will spill the news eventually. I can tell she already knows he did something, but Eva is just smart that way, lol. Oh no! Here comes Chris! And now, I scream! *screams* I knew he wanted to televise the wedding! Chris, do I have to rant again? I think he should just leave them alone. I was surprised to see Bridgette let him and Chef in, that could be a mistake, Chris is known to lie. And Chef’s cooking? Oh boy. And they get food poisoning! Nice Chef, real nice! Poor Bridgette, again, thanks to Chef her wedding might be ruined! I hope they can get through it. This is getting great Winter! I loved this chapter and now I’m so happy I get to read the next one, but sadly it’s the last. Awesome work Winter-Rae, you know how to write drama without going too overboard! I’m so curious to see how the wedding turns out. Great work once again! :D Your friend, The Dark Keybearer |
Space Oddlty chapter 1 . 4/8/2009 Oh wow Winter! I am no longer just a fanboy of your work, I am a super fanboy now! My only regret is not getting to it sooner! But I'm so glad you recomended it to me! Now, on with the review! I really love it, Bridgette and Zeke seem so good for each other, I wish they really paired up now! Bridgette is stressing big time over the wedding, I remember my aunt's wedding *shudders*. I loved the flashback, it gives them a bit of history, explains what happened with them and all, nice touch. And they meet up in a bookstore that would be a surprise. Total Drama College? I laughed at that honestly. Harold and Gwen seem nice together too! Yeah, Harold, respect Zeke's thunder, lol. Oh no, Izzy and Cody on a plane? I knew that wouldn't go well. I like how you incorporated her phobia into it too, most people forget that, but you landed it. It only took Cody to calm her down! Izzy seems pretty jealous, but what girl wouldn't? I sort of cheered when she got those girls to give up on him! Three cheers for Izzy! I’m glad that Cody calmed Izzy down on the plane! I assumed she would be a bigger mess than she was, but thanks to Cody, all was well, mostly. Mile high club? Oh man that was just hilarious Winter-Rae! I love how you add funny moments out of nowhere, it just makes them funnier! Noah and Lindsey? I didn’t expect that, but now I think that’s really cute! Poor Lindsey! I hope they can get their happy ending in Las Vegas. Oddly I can see Lindsey getting married in her favorite store, lol. Luckily Noah didn’t go along with it! E-Scope! Oh man, I died at that, I bet she meant elope, haha. Another hilarious moment Winter! And Lindsey forgetting she put her engagement ring on her finger that was funny too! It seems Harold and Gwen are pretty happy with each other! Will Harold propose to her? I hope so, if he does by the end of the story, that would make an awesome sequel, but I’m getting ahead of myself. They all meet up finally! I’m loving most of the couples! Heather seems nicer, hope she stays that way for the story! Eva pregnant? What an unexpected fact, but aw! Tyler/Eva sounds good, and her comment about Tyler getting fixed was funny! Beth and Justin seem a little opposite so far, but if they’re happy that’s great, I hope to see more of them later! Courtney and Trent? I really like that; they seem to fit together to me. Katie and Sadie going into labor at the same time , oh man, just one of the many things they do together I guess, lol. Geoff and Owen will probably have a rough time with that! I loved the last line! “’I’d rather go to the spa,’ Noah mused.” Hilarious! Noah, you lazy ass you! You really don’t know how much I loved it Winter! Amazingly written, funny, romantic already and I can’t wait to start reading the next chapter! Awesome work! :D Your friend, The Dark Keybearer |
elephantburch chapter 3 . 4/7/2009 that was awesome. i was laughing a crying th whole time. I loved it. The pairings were awesome. (i especially liked izzy and cody, but you already knew that). i have a question, were Cody and Izzy married? *cough*sequel*sequel* |
dreamcollection chapter 3 . 3/20/2009 I Loved it. Especially the wedding part. Dramatic. |
TDI Charlie Brown chapter 3 . 3/3/2009 Well done! I think you and the Kobold Necromancer have made me a fan of Bridgette/Ezekiel. (I bow to you) I wouldn't mind seeing a storyabout them becoming parents next (just a suggestion) |
JoeMerl chapter 3 . 2/26/2009 You want a long one, eh? Time for the return of JoeMerl's Liveblogging Review!: Well, Bridgette seems to have gotten over last night's nervousness. Ha-ha, wake-up call! But NO! She and Zeke have seen each other! That totally cancels out the rain thing, now they're DOOMED! Chris will do something evil and Eva will go into labor and DJ will implode and who knows what else! AGH! “Cody and Izzy are next!” Well, that'll save time. ...Or not. “You have the rest of your lives to make out. Don’t wear yourselves out!” Wow. That's the most profound thing she has ever said. And also kind of hypocritical, based on what we see of her and Tyler on the show. (I suppose that makes it outside the continuity of this story, though...but still.) Chris at the salon...oh you're clever. ;-) "Not until today." Hee-hee! Saw that coming but still funny. Yay for Chef/VonTussle! :-) And friendship orgies! YAY ORGIES! And Eva's being oddly nice, but it's a good kind of oddly. Duncan giving Bridge away? Hmm...interesting choice, but again, oddly fitting. (giggles insanely) Oh, Izzy...that's so sweet of her, threatening the wedding guests with rattlesnakes. Glad she's not jealous, seeing as SHE usually gets the Z-man in your stories. ;-) DJ and Heather…yeah, they DO go well together. OH, and she’s crying too! OH, and Noah and Duncan are crying! YAY OOC CRYING! (Huh, what am I, channeling Owen here?) HA! YES YES YES! I KNEW IT! Eva’s water broke, WHOO! YES! YES! “What am I gonna do on those lonely night now!” 8-o “Daddy wanna cut the cord?” “I better not.” Smart man, Ty. Smart man. “Thirty hours! We’re adopting.” OH…for some reason, I find that INSANELY funny. And “Victory is mine!” Oh, Izzy… And of course, the honeymoon…aw. WELL then! This story was both sweet and hilarious, great work as always. Will you actually be writing a one-shot about Noah and Lindsay? Their Vegas wedding could have a lot of shenanigans…especially if Izzy hops on a plane and decides to attend. And you have to write a Gwen/Harold and Cody/Izzy wedding too, you made them catch the stuff, that’s an implied promise to write! Okay…look forward to reading your other new story tomorrow, ‘til then, thanks for the great story! |
TDIrocks1234 chapter 3 . 2/25/2009 This story was a really good one! The ending with Eva giving birth was a very happy part, along with the marrigage! Keep on writin stories! |
The Kobold Necromancer chapter 3 . 2/25/2009 YES! Yes yes yes! Oh, that stupid glitch that kept us all from logging in was killing me! I was dying to read more from, especially this, it was like rehab! Bridgette wakes everyone up with a happy scream! Everyone's reactions, especially Gwen and Izzy, were hilarious! “I hate whoever this is, I don’t care if it’s Bridgette or Eva or Cody, I hate you.” I've been so tempted to do that when answering a phone. And the follow-up was priceless! Hehe, Izzy dragged Cody into the shower with her! What a lucky guy. Off the ladies go to get hair styled! Izzy wants to shave peoples' heads, that's our E-Scope! ;) Ezekiel's hair is causing the boys to fuss more than the girls! Har har! And there is Katie, Sadie, Owen, and Geoff! Hehe, Kaden and Salim, you took my suggestion, how awesome! And there is Olga! Radical, woohoo! “It’s an orgy of friendship!” Oh, Izzy. :) Ezekiel shaking was a nice touch. Shows how much he truly cares. Aw, Duncan's giving away Bridgette! What a nice gesture! You have Ezekiel down so well. I almost starting crying right when he saw Bridgette coming down the aisle. And there goes Izzy! Way to make the mood very goofy, you crazy redhead! :D Oh man... I almost did cry during the ceremony. And I cry like DJ does, almost did at my cousin's wedding. The vows were perfect, Winter-Rae. So touching on both sides, you gave it a kind of flair that, if someone had been reading them, I would have been sobbing like Noah, Duncan, Chef, and Olga. GAH! Eva's water broke! And YES, she broke Chris Maclean's hand! Yes yes yes, woohoo! Take that, you wanker! Lindsay and Noah off to elope. Best of luck, you two. That bastard Chris, he televised the wedding! Glad he has all those broken bones, just wait until Bridgette gets hold of the other hand. Yay, Tyler's wish came true! It's a girl, a baby girl! Way to go, jock boy! “Thirty hours!” Heather said, she looked at DJ, “We’re adopting.” Hehe, hilarious, Winter. Woohoo, Harold got the garter! Most awesome! And Izzy got the bouquet, as we all knew she would to the death for it! (With the large amount she has, Cody should marry her soon.) And now it's time for their wedding night! Ezekiel being so nervous, that was so cool. Oh, Winter-Rae, this was so wonderful! If only Ezekiel and Bridgette was the real pairing... but you did this so well, I felt it really should be! This last chapter, I was tearing up and about ready to burst (then something crazy, usually Izzy) made it all goofy again! I love this story so much. Thank you, thank you, thank you! *glomps and kisses* Happy V-Day right back to you! |
aliceisntinwonderland chapter 3 . 2/25/2009 aw please make another chapter or squeal I really liked this story |
nikki-kun05 chapter 3 . 2/25/2009 I wanted to review when I was done with the story... That was just amazing! How did you pack all that...that awesomeness in three chapters? I loved every bit of it. It all made me laugh, squeel, and cry like some sort of psycho. xD The characterizations, romance, and drama were just soo...well, awesome. This just became my favorite one out of your fics. I can't wait to read whatever else your great mind comes up with. |