| Reviews for Blood Moon |
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   DevonRamone chapter 9 . 2/9/2017 vampire friends? |
| Born in 20th Century chapter 7 . 2/8/2014 grand |
| Jazzy286 chapter 32 . 7/15/2013 :O You have a talent for making for making trailers. I pictured it all in my head as I read it and was great :) |
| Juley chapter 16 . 6/21/2013 Wow!I think that Jasper is afraid that Alice would be terrefit if she see his scars from the newborns in his past...PS...LOVE this story! |
| Juley chapter 13 . 6/20/2013 Well...kind of disepointed about the kiss...but I enjoy how Jasper and Alice are getting closer and closer to each other... |
| Juley chapter 5 . 6/20/2013 OMG!Jasper saved Alice's life!I wish some cute boy could do that for me...anyways,LOVE this story!Can't wait for more chapters! |
| Keny chapter 6 . 5/18/2013 Lol love it its fuckin fabbb ok kep it up but u make to many speling mistakez ... Jasper is actally spelt jazper lol suddenly iz spelt sudenley lol xxoxox bye |
| Senile-felineS chapter 8 . 3/25/2013 I just remembered. Alice smelt to james like bella smelt to edward. If you used that then, nice touch. |
| Senile-felineS chapter 6 . 3/24/2013 This chapter was good enough, but i feel the need to return to my earlier point. It seems rather stretched that alice is noticing all of these things about the cullens now when she's know them for 2 years. It might have been better if you had come up with an in-story reason for why she did or did not notice as well as how she had explained it. |
| Senile-felineS chapter 3 . 3/24/2013 Some questions: First, has alice really not figured out the cullens are vampires? Surely the clues would be there? Second, emmit hates rosalee? And a compliment, the romance here is rather more belivable than the stuff in twilight, at least here it's not REALLY love at first sight, since she had already seen him plenty before she realised he was grouchy. That always bothered me in twilight that bella fell for edward while he was still being a bastard. |
| Senile-felineS chapter 1 . 3/24/2013 That was quite a risky move. This chapter basically started the story with the end. It might have been better to start with some exposition about how she came to forks. It would have probably made a better hook. On the other hand, it's your story to tell, so you can do whatever you want. |
| kittenb999 chapter 5 . 3/6/2013 loved he chapter, I especially thought the doctor's orders line was very cleaver |
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/5/2012 So, as you know my firend made a banner for you :D this one gallery/38070354#/d569xak this one #/d569yci yay, but I must gave her 5 bugs :P but anyway, this is cool :D |
| robby chapter 24 . 3/23/2012 Oh good finally the plot thickens. |
| robby chapter 1 . 3/19/2012 First chapter sounds like a crountry western song. |
