Not sure why Bella couldn't go and stay with Edward until Charlie came around. I would think at her age she shouldn't be still treated like a child. As an adult she should have stayed and held her ground.
Thanks for the story, I enjoyed reading it.

Cute story

I like your story so far I guess some ppl don't like how long you are teasing them with edward and bella but your right it's your story . Keep on writing!

Make the next chapter all about the wedding cause that's what this leads on to I love how u did the song from Taylor swift love story

I love it but u should so have rose be the bridesmaids

thats it (pout):

this is the best fanfic ever #somuchdrama

It's been a long time since you published this story and I'm sure your writing style would be very different now, so I'll give my comments on this old work, no offence to your current writing which I'm sure has improved.

This story had a great idea and storyline. It was romantic without being too mushy or overly dramatic. The only problem I have with it was that you dragged Bella and Edward's reunion for so long that it started to get boring. I mean, they only reunited halfway through your story.

And once they were together, suddenly everything was very rushing and I felt that you were trying so hard to throw everything in there. The plot was not very well timed out but the idea was there.

This was a good story nonetheless. I hope you'll pick up writing again.

That's amazing! I love how the song fit perfectly into the end... Your a really great author. I really like this story.

I love the way you write and how you didn't just wrote that Bella was sad and that. But I truly believe your an amazing writer and please write more of Bella and Edward.

Your vampire information isn't perfect but pretty good. Loving the story. Don't let the haters get you down!

nice

THIS IS AMAZING! You added a mix of every book in your special way. All that was missing was renesme which of course would not be possible, for Bella was a vampire from the start. You added the beginning when they met. New moon when Edward left, aka in here Edward "died" Then eclipse when Edward returned but Charlie did not approve, hence in the story. Then they get married aka this. So Bella is a vampire. This is simply amazing. If the doctor thing does not work, but I hope it works, you can have a job as a author!

This is cute!

The story is great