I feel like the transition of Allison was a bit rushed but I love how her character is portrayed now. Also Tonks and Remus forever!

this switched between 1st and 3rd person pov a couple of times, like ?

But why is sirius so bitter? What happens to iris?

This fic is so poorly written

Update and update. I love you. Get Sirius and iris together they are crazy for each other. Don't worry about going with the real jk Rowling story do it originally. listen to loser reviewers listen to me. And could u mind adding Hestia Jones as a character just for fun. She should be good mind u . Just kidding but I would appreciate her. Add her like you added please pretty please. I would drop in 100 reviews.

Sammie xoxo

You need your choices for the suitable Barnes is the perfect one to act Sirius. For James I would like no one other than Taron eggerton with the look of Kingsman but should work on the stuck up is nice for Andrew garfield. As for Lily it should be Lindsay Lohan with look she had in herbie or Karen Gillan. Alison is suited for Kristen Stewart and with iris I am torn but settle for Kristen Bell. Peter can be anyone I seriously don't care. Now for your story...I LOVE IT. I HAVE FALLEN IN LOVE WITH IT I love your sweet descriptions of Remus and Alison but u should really get them together. Your fluff should go a little intense. For Lily and James it's going absolutely nice. GET SIRIUS AND IRIS TOGETHER AGAIN!AND DO IT YOUR WAY NOT CANON . DONT GET LILY JAMES KILLED HAVE AN ORIGINAL YOU ALWAYS

SAMMIE xoxo

I did my best on the Mary Sue test and Iris only got 40%

I just read your story and it is amazing! Iris is such a colorful character and I really love the way you portrayed Sirius and James. Also, I really enjoyed all of the stories about your friends! They sound like a fun group. This is probably one of the best HP fanfictions I've read, and believe me, I've read A LOT of them. Thanks for a wonderful story!

OH MY GOSH I LOVE THAT SONG. I'm singing it for my graduation.

Okay I've been wanting to review Paso chapters but I'm too lazy. Basically I LOVE this story but Sirius and Iris are WAY too stubborn :p. Also I love all the shows you mention, ESPECIALLY gossip girl. So yeah thanks for making this story. XOXO, bethel.

Okay. As my final review I have to say it wasn't a bad fic. I actually enjoyed it, and although previous reviews would look quite bad on my behalf, this story actually does make me happy. It is not the best fic I have read, certainly not the worst. You're descriptions of love and what one feels without the other is purely beautiful. To those looking at interest at this fic, although massive inaccuracies and at times highly predictable, it is a solid 7.5/10. Looking forward to reading the sequel. Good job.

Note to author. It is illegal to be gay at this time period in England. They wouldn't talk so freely and how about it. Also stop using gay as a insult. Jesus Christ.

I'm sorry but all of sixth year and seventh year in the school voted all the Gryffindor year sevens? What?

Okay why are you suddenly censoring your language? You used teens like fuck and bastard? Anyway are you kidding me with Allison? What eased the point of going y to the clinic with Lily before? Just to add drama?! Poor writing

Childhood f friend? He was 25 now and she is 17/18. That means when he was 13 she was 5?! Okay... what ever. And stop gay insults... and it is more and more clear that you are pro life...