Great story and well written, I love the Christmas Carol concept. Brilliant idea really, I am curious as to what happens next to Severus. Thanks for sharing, I enjoyed this one shot.

An engaging and vivid read! Your writing is very skillful. The lines "I see a baby named Fred in the near future, born to a melancholy red head selling jokes and trouble in Diagon Alley" and "Bled empty of his good looks and charisma, his mercurial brightness, Black was at last his equal in repulsiveness" as particularly perfect. Thanks for posting :)

That was ingenius! I love the story and how Severus is given another chance to live, lovely!

Doesn't make sense
All the reactions are off
As if snape would treat lily like that! :/

I liked it :D May 2nd is the day after my friggen b-day .L

This is really nicely written.

Usually you can tell that a one shot is pretty good if it gets around 9 reviews, at fifteen? well, it says much.

I liked this mostly for the fact that it was the marauders you used to convince him to keep living, though they all hate each other they were willing to be the ones to present him with another chance at life.

I'm also sure everyone enjoyed the little scene of umbridge being dragged away, I know I did.

The only complaint I have is that it ended too soon (though that may be from my eagerness for more...)

Very nice job, I hope to see more like this in the future (quality wise...)

loved it, glad snape's alive

Great Job with the Fic, I loved it!

~CeKay

Haha, loved the ending. Perfect way to use the mauraders...not even when he is dying can he get away from them :)

I enjoyed this story too!

Betty

Me likey

My, Severus is ever so cheerful. I just adored the Snape-ness at the ending, all that Potter-contempt and slight respect. :)

Wow...that was one of the best oneshots I've ever read. I adored the sarcastic banter between Snape and the Marauders, and the whole idea was brilliant. I just wish it was longer. Definitely one of my favourite stories! :)

I really liked this. I thought it was a clever idea. :)

I really, like this. I've never actually read Dickens but I've heard it told many times. I like this version. Great job.