NOOOOO DONT BREAK UP HARRY AND JUNE

I know you haven’t Written This story in years but this is a great story and I would love if you where able to finish it or at lest post a adoption chapter.

O Come 9n 7 years and no update shit still love it though and if ever do a rewrite please don't kill June

Im out

Please finish this off

I've lost interest in your story you went too far killing off Harry's girlfriend from this point on the store is going to suck in my opinion and I imagine a lot of others I hate stories like this and if this is like any of your other stories where you kill off main characters you're a piss poor writer you don't do that Side characters okay but Maine no I don't care it's because you want to bring in somebody else you don't invest that much In too a character and then just do that if you was going to do that you should have done that way earlier but now it's too late you just ruined the story good luck

Why the fuck would they sneak a boxed up dragon from Hagrids hut which is away from the castle into the castle then to the top of the tower for? The person picking up the dragon was on a broom, Hagrids hut is away from the castle and easier to find from the air that a tower on a castle filled with them not to mention the person on the broom can fly and land at Hagrids hut. It makes absolute zero sense to go into the castle like that. Also them forgetting the cloak yeah that is not believable at all and forced stupidity to force a cannon moment.

I've always hated fics that are unimaginative and never actually stray too far from canon events. You'd think someone like Harry, after being raised and mentored by two of the greatest and intelligent pranksters in the wizarding world, might have SOME modicum amount of greater intellect and cunning than the muggleborn canon Harry. Nope. Same events, same outcomes, minor dialogue changes. All in all, the changes you make feel like they're there to serve as shock and awe and make the fic more memorable rather than being legitimately impactful events. It's lame.

Well, this fiction is (was ?) quite marvelous, and I hope you will really try to update it or put it up for adoption :s

Oh it must be so hard for you to insert letters to paddy and moon man ( such a unique name) in the original jk story...
Its obvious u ran out of ideas to continue this unique fiction...
Take your time...after all u have to rewrite 7 jk's books ...

Honestly I loved the story up to the point of the sudden girlfriend June with little to no less up, got over that and Harry extreme OPness, and kept reading, but Toni’s falling for him in a few weeks, and her “seeing past” Him and his accomplishments a total flip within a few parargraphs, there isn’t enough character development. The only character w/ any complexity in this is harry.

For your first official sex scene, I think you did a pretty damn good job. Keep up the great work!

I wish the pairings were gay

Hey you start writing please its killing me not knowing what comes next

OK. No! Just no! Not even an Azkaban escapee like Black would give an eleven y/o firewhiskey. Well, maybe a small (REALLY SMALL) taste, not a bottle. Butterbeeer, yes, an everlasting supply of dungbombs, yes, a lot of REALLY dangerous and useful potions, YES! Not something that would damage his mental development. Sorry, just don't but it. Still a great story, I enjoy it very much.