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   yeehawbeets chapter 22 . 7/7/2018 "battle royale-like kiss" im dying also that was the hottest lawlight sex ive ever read Okay. So. It's been 9 years like i said before and you probably won't see this. But. I felt the need to leave a second long review as my final review. I binge read this story in two days, and I say with complete honesty that this has become my favorite lawlight fanfiction. The plot developed so smoothly, and you incorporated so many different genres into the story without making it too complicated. The romance was cute, in character, and sweet, the mystery was gripping and suspenseful, and every other element was executed perfectly. The banter between L and Light was so cute and worked so well with the characters' personalities. Also, congrats on finishing your first multi-chapter story! It's so good that I would never be able to guess it was someone's first story. There are some lines and scenes here that I'll never forget *cough*VIAGRA*cough*... AND the ending wasn't abrupt or forced, and I felt satisfied with how the story concluded. I think I'm beginning to repeat myself (did i mention i LOVe this fic? no? well, let me tell you...) so I'll end my review here... thank you for bringing this beautiful creation into the world! |
| yeehawbeets chapter 21 . 7/7/2018 awwwwwwww 3 i ship it so much! this is amazing and i lovei ttt |
| yeehawbeets chapter 19 . 7/7/2018 omng omg L noooo also (diet) COKE IS BETTER but regular pepsi is better |
| yeehawbeets chapter 17 . 7/7/2018 NOOO THE CLIFFHANGER L IS U OK NUUU MYT CHILD AJDKSFLHKLSDJKF PLS DONT DIE maH cHILD im sobbing |
| yeehawbeets chapter 16 . 7/7/2018 omg i loved the dreams! DfhjsLKDJ this fic is amazing |
| yeehawbeets chapter 15 . 7/7/2018 i loved the fairy tale dream! also billy bob...hes B isnt he? dun dun duuuunnnn *such a cliffhanger thooo* |
| yeehawbeets chapter 14 . 7/7/2018 bahahahah ryuk tho also im scared for light hE cAnT dIe and he needs L ;-; |
| yeehawbeets chapter 11 . 7/6/2018 asjdhfldks so much angst but i love it |
| yeehawbeets chapter 10 . 7/6/2018 omg nuuuuuu poor L ;-; will he still chexk on light? |
| yeehawbeets chapter 8 . 7/6/2018 oops this is a short review but L wants to 'tap that' ;) also im screaming that kiss on the cheek from light aasdflkjsdn falksd |
| yeehawbeets chapter 6 . 7/6/2018 "an aggressive top" omg i remember that line xD |
| yeehawbeets chapter 7 . 7/6/2018 hmm a long review? you said you like long reviews the most so here i go xD Honestly, this is one of my favorite fanfictions in the Death Note archive. It's gripping (I'm writing this review at midnight), humorous, and isn't OOC at all. I loved the another note book reference in the previous chapter (which mentioned in another review) and it's amazing how you can so easily weave humor and murder mystery together. I'm unable to put my laptop down, and I love the development in L and raito's relationship! I'm aware this review is nearly a decade late, and you most likely won't read it, but I felt the need to express how much I've enjoyed the first seven chapters of your fanfiction. i tried xP |
| yeehawbeets chapter 4 . 7/6/2018 awwwww...L sleeping on raito is so cute ;p raito we all know you like L stop denying it and dont break his poor heart :( (this fic is amazing holy frikc) |
| yeehawbeets chapter 3 . 7/6/2018 hopefully im not annoying by reviewing every chapter :p anyways L saying "boo" gives me life also this fic is still gOlD |
| yeehawbeets chapter 2 . 7/6/2018 "he's probably in the middle of an important thought process" and L's just daydreaming about light xD this fanfic is qUaLitY |
