Love this omg

Lmfao I freaking love Quil and Embry the kind of best friends you need...at the same time the embarrassing kind...but that's what makes them loveable

This is THE funniest fic I've ever read! Great job!

what the fuck this was so cute i am going to EXPLODE
SO CUTE IM IN PAIN
honestly i just love love love this so much everything is ic and well written and cute and fun and such an ideal fic? and quil and embry WHAT PROBLEM SONS I LOVE THEM

Yay what a night it's good to have some fun...great story good job...

Please make another chapter, if u have what's the name of it?! :-)

CUTE! Shit, I love Quil and Embry, they crack me up so bad that I lose my marbles! This is a masterpiece!

i love it it's funny

I love this. It is perfect in so many ways. It is the beginning of the relationship between Jake and Bella that should have been. She is so much more of a complete person and not just a sad miserable vampire yearning girl. Jake's love is sweet and charming, from the way he looks at her to the way he waits for her to ask for a better kiss. Quil and Embry are fantastic. I laughed out loud at Quil and then I appreciated Embry for being a friend to say something about Jake to Bella. And the fireworks on the beacj were absolutely awesome! Thanks for writing!

Absolutely perfect. Loved it. Certainly would have enjoyed more.

LOVE THIS STORY!

You know, sometimes I hate reading stories as good as this because it makes me realize just how fictional Jacob is and how he does not exist in the real world. Thanks a lot for this amazing piece anyway :) x

great little story

This is why I love the Pack so much. Something about the whole thing is just so easy and real, even with all the supernatural stuff.

...God, I love Quil.

very cute. well written. i liked it alot :)