Reviews for Dispute within the red rose family |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Love it the end was pretty funny man its good |
![]() ![]() ![]() it would be so awesome to have a continuation for this fanfic may i suggest them both fighting over her then have someone (preferably a girl)maybe shizuka come back and confesses to yumi. |
![]() ![]() ![]() does this story, by any chance, have a sequel? i'm not saying that it is lacking in any way, it's just that, well, how do i put this, i think this story is really... cute, i guess... and i would really like to know who yumi chose between her souers... anyway, thanks for the good read! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hahaha that was funny and cute at the same time, thanks for writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() well i have got to say this has got to be one of the funniest fic i have read in a long time and i think the best and worst part of this is that i could totally see touko and sachiko going at it over something like this. rofl well i just had to add my two cents and great fic |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the story... I was laughing really hard... Please epdate soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOL so funny. You should write more humor. |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw. too fast. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, there were a few grammatical errors BUT OMG this fic is so cute! Brightened up my day in a hurry. Seriously, get someone to beta for you or just clean it up a bit and this fic will be perfect :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() HAHAH I couldent stop laughing Sachiko and Touko wanting to kiss her lol. We want a cat fight please update asap ready 2 reviewxx |
![]() ![]() ![]() A great fanfic! I love both SachikoXYumi and YumiXTouko to I just loved it! ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is hella funny! its nice change of pace from the heavy stuff that i was reading!:D please please update soon and keep it up! i absolutely love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, pleaasse write a sequel to this! Preferbally several chapters! I loved the humour and flow of it and how Sachiko and Touko argued over who would get Yumi X} |
![]() ![]() ![]() how amusing, the sight of yumi being fought over by touko and sachiko |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol. awesome story! hilarious, sachiko and touko fighting over yumi-chan! ) more chapters please . . . |