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   Automail-gHost chapter 17 . 5/1 I re-read this story every once and a while when I want to read some quality Smallville fanfiction- love the story every time and I so hope you come back to this someday! I would definitely read a whole series re-write if you were spearheading it! I love this idea and I so wish there were more like it- Lex deserves to be a good guy! And he deserves friendship! Anyway, truly love the story and I hope whatever has kept you from writing has been of the mundane variety and that you are doing okay. :) |
| Elise chapter 17 . 1/6 Good luck finishing it, and I do hope the story makes it to divergances eventually. Its 2020, but you have come back from Hiatus before. Thanks for the read |
| Elise chapter 5 . 1/6 Can't they just get rid of it and let Whitney take the fall |
| Elise chapter 4 . 1/6 I'd like to say I am enjoying the story so far! Slight Grammer nitpick, Its Chloe, not Cloe. The H is silent, and a little annoying. Anyway, I look forward to reading the rest of it! |
| belladu57 chapter 17 . 10/16/2019 Very good |
| Guest chapter 8 . 4/14/2019 Good |
| shall-iin chapter 10 . 2/9/2018 actually wasn't it stated that he had a higher white blood cell count that raised his immune system to be very strong and after his exposure, he never got any kind of disease or illness? Also some lower level of protection against poisons given how many times people drugged him enough that he should have died. |
| Kureiji-Kurai chapter 17 . 12/29/2016 I really, really love this! You use the lines but you give everything a fresh feel. I see characters differently thanks to you. Some I didn't like while watching, I find I like much better here. You bring up points in their interactions that would never have occurred to me otherwise. I love the changes you make as well. Also, I like what you do with Lex! It just adds depth! |
| Reenan Lefey chapter 17 . 1/4/2016 Well it's nice to meet someone who updates about as often as I do. Think maybe the reason you're avoiding this so much is because of how closely your sticking to canon? If the only thing your changing is the Clark/Lex interactions then that should be what your chapters focus on. There's no point in rewriting scenes that are straight from Canon, just give us a glimpse here and there to let us know how far along we are. Your story will progress faster and be more fun to write. I do like the idea though and your writing skills are solid. Cheers! |
| DDarklolita chapter 17 . 8/20/2015 Gime more |
| just yuki chapter 17 . 8/14/2015 Update soon please |
| nekochan1994 chapter 6 . 7/25/2015 Oh Jesus... |
| nekochan1994 chapter 5 . 7/25/2015 Awesome ~ sauce~~~! |
| nekochan1994 chapter 4 . 7/25/2015 Shiiiiiiit ... Lex is gonna flip. |
| nekochan1994 chapter 3 . 7/25/2015 John's gonna flip. |
