Dear something's got to give:

This was wonderful. I love the mood you set up, and your style of writing in this piece fit it beautifully. Lavi's Noah personality too is very well done, and I love how you showed his and Kanda's interactions. Very beautiful. I love the description, and the small similarities from Exorcist!Lavi to Noah!Lavi. As well, the way you tied in Kanda's past was done wonderfully, just as his opinions and thoughts were as well.
Having a Bookman on both sides of the war just makes sense, no? I can understand why it would be hard to get one on the Earl's side, what with the need to be a Noah, but it simply makes sense. I'm a bit surprised it hasn't happened yet in the manga. Unless it has, and I'm just too behind.
At any rate, wonderful job. This piece was amazing.

Sincerely,
Master of the Hellish Yard

Dear GODS on toasted butter! That was just DARK! Wow! This is something else! Fantastic job on the mindfuckery! Really! This is excellently twisted! XD

wow... Just wow... I completely freaking love this fic... I found it interesting, and enjoyable, when you brought up the idea of any Noah being something different, Lavi being regret (or that being what i understood about what you were saying) Lavi's so... LAVI, the same personality with a slight hint of a sadistic attitude because of his Noah... Very, VERY enjoyable~

God, I love your writing style. I really wouldn't mind reading more stuff written by you. and I seriously can't understand how this story didn't get more reviews, it's completely made of awesome from the beginning to the end. i feel like saying "i love, love, love,love (etc) it" over and over again, but I guess you wouldn't appreciate that.

oh well. PLEASE DO WRITE MORE. *.*

wow... that's all I can say for this fic.

-stares at you- I fucking love the feel of this! It was flipping awesome! Loved a sadistic mania Noah Rabi accompanied by a Kanda who has been dragged on to the ride with no way to get off but to stay till the end. Your writing has so much style in here, the way your sentences form are just madness. So hot, so raw, so sick, so much humanity and just so damn bloody.

Made me melt with love, though I am not sure whether I totally understood the innocence part. So Kanda got Rabi to take it out from his back, but Rabi replanted right back into his hands?

And fucking Kanda right in front of the Virgin was a thumbs up to the plot, I just loved the way everything worked out. SO nice, so smooth, and just so damn real (with all those betrayals, biting conversations, and the reference back to a wedding and marriage).

I hope my rambling isn't too overwhelming, I can get carried away. -bows with a blush-

Kuro

PS: If only ff.n would allow me, I would favorite this story a billion times XD

interesting. i like your writing style.

Very compelling and still poignant writing style.

I am intrigued and a bit saddened by the unfolding of the plot, of course. This is the Lavi of my nightmares.

Still, I'm very drawn to the continuation. Looking forward to the updates