I was sorta giggling through the entire thing... I'm weird, reading this kind of stuff makes me all giggly when it's really good. But that ending, it made me laugh way harder than I should have. xD Poor Hayner never got to pee! I hope Roxas cleaned up...

I think, that the word you're looking for is "stage whisper". It's like a loud whisper some people do when they're doing a play... But anyways, great story! But I have to wonder. Did Hayner eventually go to the bathroom and pee?

O/O

*le nosebleed*

omg i read this a few months ago an an could never find it again but i finally did ty 3

You must be God... right? Hottest thing ever written... EVER! Great job! XD

wow...ur friend is lucky as hell! That was hilarious and smexy, and I knew hayner was gonna hear it sometimes he's so nosy but I guess it was an accident aw well anyways I loved it :3

This...

THIS.

Best thing ever. I laughed so freaking hard. Also, it was sweet how when Roxas called Axel, his first thought was to ask if he was okay and if everything was alright. Just a cute little detail alongside all the epic phone-sex.

Pfffft, favorited.

amazing... that last part made me laugh so hard. poor poor Hayner.

*wipes nosebleed*

That was very hot. Your writing was great.

Also, that last line? Priceless.

:)

The end made me LULZ! That was GOREGOUS! LO OO OO OOVD IT!

Your story is awesome. Mah favorite... ever... klovebai

; U ; That was BEAUTIFUL~ The last line cracked me up XD Poor, poor Hayner.

Okay, I know this is almost a year late, but reviews are nice all the same, y/y?

God, that was amazing. Good fic. Very good fic. I may just go read some of your other stuff now. Yes. Yes I may. xD;

Oh god that was hot

I have a newfound love for phone sex now...especially akuroku phone sex ohoho~

V. nice fic, made my night xx tyty

-Bexx

omgosh, I loved this(: