This was so amazingly good and well written. I loved the beginning and the way you interpreted the time before Sheena left. :)

This was very nice.:) I quite enjoyed seeing things from Zelos' perspective. Everything flowed nicely, and I didn't get bored reading it. Awesome job. XD -SC

D'aww...

This was adorable, Riku.

OH EM GE!

I adored this! :D You really are a great writer, you know that? I enjoy your syntax and word choice and such. I like when people use actual words rather than a fourth grade vocabulary. XD

And the plot was so cute! 3 I love them being exactly this. In character and yet revealing a more important side, past the random arguing and wanking at each other about stupid stuff. And that was cute too about 'love', I hardly imagine he'd even know the meaning of the word, exactly like you said. He's like a stray dog in the pound. Take him home, Sheena, he needs love and attention. ;3

THANKYUU AGAIN! I feel so special, d'aw...x3

Your fwend,

FP