| Reviews for A Work in Progress |
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   Orihime-18 chapter 7 . 7/22 When ichi brings hime her fav food (odd foods lol) was so cute..she knows her much..this is a cute and adorable ichihime story..(when at the end u wil find out it was Matsumoto’s plan maybe she’s dying to see ichigo and hime together to came up a plan even to take home of innocent people..my goodness she burned all hahaha).. and Livia stil don’t learn to tap dance lol..liked this story |
| robot584 chapter 7 . 8/20/2019 That's it! Rangiku is an evil genius lol, well being Gin's boyfriend ofc. love it. |
| kalmaegi chapter 7 . 6/11/2018 Oh my, how nostalgic. Though I don't think I've ever gotten to finish this back then. Wow. Ichigo getting some sweet sweet torture thanks to Orihime while Tatsuki and apparently Rangiku schemed of ways to get them together. So cute. It's just like those two to need a push from outside forces to admit their feelings for each other. I love how Orihime took a minute to reminisce about her first time(?!) in Ichigo's room. Named the puppy she took in after a character from Ichigo's favorite books. The contradiction of feelings expressed in her face while thinking about fond memories with her brother. That describes her so well. Cheerful but with a hidden sorrow. On Ichigo's side, I love how his exasperated fussing is very much alive here. It's a thing I love most in the series. And the way he's always skeptical but attentive whenever Orihime does her thing. When he immediately confronted Tatsuki because he knows Orihime is sad, it's obvious he doesn't want her unhappy. His awkward comforting was adorable too. |
| Guest chapter 3 . 12/25/2017 Lol poor underwear! POOR ICHIGO TOO LOLOLOL |
| Guest chapter 7 . 9/29/2017 Love this story. |
| gamersweetheart chapter 6 . 4/12/2017 That's probably good... hard to date under the same roof |
| gamersweetheart chapter 5 . 4/12/2017 Sad does she think he didn't like it? |
| gamersweetheart chapter 4 . 4/12/2017 I'm so sad your story is almost over |
| gamersweetheart chapter 3 . 4/12/2017 Oh my goodness haha |
| gamersweetheart chapter 2 . 4/12/2017 Idk how kon will do vs a puppy haha |
| gamersweetheart chapter 1 . 4/12/2017 I wanna find a puppy! |
| 3 chapter 7 . 12/29/2016 I love that ending |
| The Neutrino chapter 7 . 10/16/2016 MATSUMOTO! |
| LadyHiyorin chapter 7 . 10/4/2016 So cute! I love how u portrait Ichigo and Orihime in this fanfic! So cute story! ;) |
| MelancholyMemories chapter 7 . 7/26/2016 Wanted to tell you what a wonderful fic you've written! I read many storie that just don't quite seem to correctly portray Ichigo's personality and you've done it swimmingly. I truly feel like I've found a diamond in the rough with this fic. Thanks for taking the time to write it! |
