Perfect. So Bloody Perfect!

This is really good! I love these pairing

Oh, I enjoyed this greatly. A little bit of angst, a little bit of fluff, and all's well. :) The boys may have been a teensy bit OOC, but no harm done; I think it worked rather well indeed. And I particularly liked the ending. So like Jack to be all dramatic and then just escape. XD Always great to find more Jack/Beckett supporters in the world!

Aww, so cute and sad :)

~IP~

What an interesting idea.I never would have thought of nice quote, btw. That's a good reason Jack would be pissed as insightful.

Okay. I think you have a lovely premise here. I really do see a lot of potential...however...

Jack was in the East Indea Tading Company, not the Navy.

So the Naval Officer comment really didn't make any sense.

Everything else was great though. I think you did a great job.