pls add on I love it

I am confused if it is raining why isn't Cleo transforming into a mermaid is she a mermaid in this is it h2o before the mermaid but good start

(my first language is German so i hope you understand my review xD)

So I've only found this story now and I really really love it. You portrayed Zane's feelings and personality very good. I specifically liked the beginning when Lewis and Cleo found him sitting in the rain. Not many authors can write Rikki and Zane in character seeing as they are difficul to figure out. But you my friend did that perfectly. Excellent job, darling. ;D

I hope you can continue this and make it a multi-chartered fic :)

~Cindy

One-shots make me NEED more. I need you to continue this! Zane has to be my favorite character...or tied with Rikki. Zane is sick? Im about to die! COntinue...;)

hey awsome story loved it hope you update soon!

I just wanted to let you know how much I really enjoyed reading this. I LOVE your portrayal of Zane, (I keep wanted to spell it Zhane though. Curse fandoms with similar names! xD) but not only that, despite the story being from Zane's point of view, you've done the other characters justice as well.

I really hope that you continue writing this, even though it's been quite some time since there has been an update. That said, enjoy writing, and whatever else life throws at you!

-Little Bat

This was very well written. I especially enjoyed the opening scene where Cleo and Lewis find Zane sitting in the rain. It was touching. And communicated his dark, tortured feelings without having unnecessary conjecture bog it down. Well done!

I look forward to reading more from you.

Awh I love Zane fics :)

Thanks for doing this :D Can't wait to hear more from you

Aww So Cute Carnt Wait Till The Nxt Chap If There Is One Lol

~Toodles!~