| Reviews for Evening |
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  lol chapter 9 . 5/20/2017 I'm sorry, but I can't finish this. It's just horribly written! There's no description of anything, just dialogue. And everyone is out of character! The only good thing about this story is the idea. I'd love to have that idea well-thought-out and well written... |
 Twihard-rossy98 chapter 30 . 10/28/2012 Loved it... absolutely amazing. what is the sequel |
| Twihard-rossy98 chapter 25 . 10/28/2012 How come bella didnèt just sheild them... That kinda confused me... |
| NannaRahRah chapter 23 . 12/8/2010 love it |
| Silent Blood Rose chapter 30 . 11/19/2010 I just looked at ur bio. I couldnt find the sequle. but i love this story. I've read it 6 times. |
| krazykat20 chapter 30 . 8/23/2010 Hi, i really did enjoy reading this story and seem to have the nack of imagination. Well done, i will keep a look out for more of your stories xx |
| coheed cutie chapter 2 . 7/12/2010 im not trying to sound like a total physco person or anything but bella wouldnt even be happy about that no matter what the circumstance was and they indeed could have stopped they heart attack by monitering his heart carlisle is a doctor so he should be able to do something |
| coheed cutie chapter 1 . 7/12/2010 your a great writer but i noticed some factual flaws in your story (facts as in twilight related stuff) i dont think they would have to fake bellas death for charlie because he was on a need to know basis and bella would be able to walk in heals because shes a vampire now and shes graceful |
| Cit-Cat Mccoy chapter 30 . 6/28/2010 this was so good! The characters were perfect! |
| Megan Cromwell chapter 30 . 5/22/2010 I think that this is good! Can't wait to read the sequel! |
| twilightobsessed40873a chapter 30 . 5/2/2010 That rocked |
| Jilliannnnnn chapter 30 . 2/28/2010 well, im going to start with the chapter. it was very very nicely written. i think it was PERFECT. i especially liked to see the relationships through renesmee's eyes. now to the entire story. i think that it was great. really, i do. the characters were true to stephenie meyer's, but you gave them a personal twist. i like that. also, i liked how there was a bit more of an emphasis on alice and jasper. (haha) i dont think there was enough of them in the books, and their relationship was a little mysterious. this cleared things up a bit. plus, it was nice to get the volturi thing wrapped up once and for all. i enjoyed reading this. it was very entertaining. thanks, logan! |
| Jilliannnnnn chapter 29 . 2/28/2010 god. im glad it ended happily. |
| Jilliannnnnn chapter 28 . 2/28/2010 good. someone finally stood up to him. |
| Jilliannnnnn chapter 27 . 2/28/2010 haha the first thing alice notices is renesmee's outfit! |
