I liked your ideas in this. I especially loved the fact that Kenny wasn't dead as they left him and the scene with one of them telling Wizeman Kenny's last wish and Wizeman's and Reala's reactions on it. I literally fell of my chair and have been ROFL and LMAO. Very good work and very funny. Mon respect auteur. Très bon travail et continue comme ça. ;)

Oh my gawd! I just found out that you wrote this AND Knave and the Black Knight! stupid me! *hits herself with a brick* OW! They're both hilarious!

Meh, they were all going die anyway. I got a laugh at Charles repeating Kenny's last wish and Reala going: "Heh...right?"

Wizeman certainly doesn't use/dispose of his minions well.

Heh, oh those poor MothPits. Though I don't feel much sympathy towards them since in that level I kept sending them to My Dream by accident. Burning firey death is too good for you, MothPits.

Ah, that was funny reading about Will's expression: "So Owl can talk to you some more!"

I also liked the fact Kenny wasn't even dead yet when they left him. "Ow!" Hehehehehehehehe

oh meih gawd you killed Kenny

Reala: you ba- wait i never liked him in the first place

He, I like how they always seem to get stuck taking care of Cerebus. I like how Ken wants to off Reala. Fun stuff.

I like the idea of a glimspe at the lives of the lower ranking Nightmarens. I hate to say, but I have to check back to the first chapter because I forget their names. It's cute their dislike of Johnson. You didn't even need to put a disclaimer at the end to tell they didn't like him.

I loved this chapter, I almost fell out of my chair laughing. I was thinking the same thing about them being on the tree when the bombs explouded.

I think the orange sheep Nightmarens are called Shleep, and other than that I can't name any more of them. But if you play through the chase missions in JoD when you see one of the third class look around for Owl, because I think he will name most of them.

Keep up the great work!